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 Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 2:59 pm
The screams...they break me like stones upon a glass window shattering into thousands of tiny little peices, all fluttering down into the blackness of the heart that is mine; into void that is blackness, dissaperaing into the forgotton deathwish of night in Lucifer's command bringing back bits and peices of voices that call out for help, but recive nothing but empty hands, because they are the unfortanante, fearing death, fearing what they have become, showering others in their fear, never letting go of the past; they will always be remembers as the tiny little peices of shatterd glass that came from the stone of screams.
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Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 3:01 pm
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Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 3:50 pm
Isel http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=7772981 Don't start a trend of things like ^that^.What do you mean by that? It was my first prose I ever wrote.
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Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 7:11 pm
Exactly, it should be your first AND your last.
There's WAY too much of it in one day today... just subjectless broken-up prose, that has no depth or real meaning other than a fleeting significance that dissipates within moments.
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Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 4:58 am
Isel Exactly, it should be your first AND your last.
There's WAY too much of it in one day today... just subjectless broken-up prose, that has no depth or real meaning other than a fleeting significance that dissipates within moments. It had meaning to me...
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Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 3:49 pm
Everything that a human creates has meaning to the creator. Whether or not it has easily-translated meaning to others makes it art.
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Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 4:57 pm
Isel Everything that a human creates has meaning to the creator. Whether or not it has easily-translated meaning to others makes it art. So this has no meaning to others?
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Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 7:10 pm
Well, it'll have a meaning, but not the one you want.
"That person was going out of their way to sound as dark as possible, I don't like that"
OR
you'll get fakes who will say "lolz it iz rly good u shuld be poetttt"
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Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 7:34 pm
Isel Well, it'll have a meaning, but not the one you want.
"That person was going out of their way to sound as dark as possible, I don't like that"
OR
you'll get fakes who will say "lolz it iz rly good u shuld be poetttt" I wasn't trying to sound as dark as possible, it just sorta came out. I was listinging to AFI at the time so that was what I had to work with. And I actually am a poet...a published one at that.
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Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 8:08 pm
Yeah, a lot of people are published poets.
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Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 11:41 am
Isel Yeah, a lot of people are published poets. Oh...guess it's not that hard to do...
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