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 Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 8:43 pm
my life is full of deppression
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im a failyer u should know
im full of the h8tred that people show
im turning more lonely as i grow
im crying these tears that melt the snow
im hurting inside as i write this now
im hopeing you will help the poor souls that know how
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Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 12:42 pm
This bothers me. Like a corpse left unburied, that's the bother I'm feeling.
Please eliminate this filth.
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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 2:18 am
Constructive Criticism: 'failyer' and 'h8tred' aren't making a statement. They're just wrong.
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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 5:57 pm
Really good man...Just that the speeling erros looks kinda awkward...
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