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Nyokai

PostPosted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 8:42 am


This thing I wrote it last night... hopefully is the first chapter from a longer story... I warn I used trivial language in some sentences...

This are covers that the ex-bf of Ella, on gaia with the nick of Hammering3D made for this story... So, thx dude... smile

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Episode 1 - The World Today

there was a time when people din not believe in eachother and they were fearing themselves. their only "salvation" were the Gods in which they foolishly entrusted their lives. there were no families and there were no friendship or lovers. there was nothing. it was a miracle at that time that human kind was still standing, when everybody was stabbing eachother for the most simple things. I saw a little boy get killed because he refused to give to 3 grown ups a broken toy. The most horrible thing was that they killed the boy and then, for the same toy, they killed eachother. no one left alive that place. The biggest guy killed one of the other two and then the one left, stabbed him with a knife in the stomach, while the big guy pushed a metal stick into his opponent's eye until it reached the brain and killed the poor b*****d. what came next was even worse. nobody said a thing, nobody did anything. not even the kid's mom. You wonder how I knew that she was his mom. Well, it's because I asked her. She just noded, but her face did not show the slightest sign of pain. Maybe she was broken inside, but her life could be so miserable that she was unable to express what she felt. So she just stood there for hours and watched her son's broken body. But the tears did not come to her eyes and not even a frown.

Yes, in these times it's dagerous to let people know you have feelings... of any kind. It's prohibited to feel anythin'. Not even hate is allowed. You have to be... blank... like a robot. just like them... they live up there where you can see the sky, while the rest of us crawl in misery like worms that eat a corpse. And maybe we are worms and we eat the "dead body" of this planet... and once we finished it... we will finally go extinct.

this doesn't have a beginning or an end... because i don't even remember when it all started. the funny thing is that instead to shortern our life terms, we made ourselves live longer. maybe we just want to all die together when all the resources are totally and forever gone and then maybe we'll start... eating eachother like cannibals. i didn't see that yet, but i'm sure there are places on what's left of the earth in which this practice is very highly appreciated. I wonder if they praise the gods too.

those damn gods are everywhere by the way... you can't breathe, because you hear the name of a god being praised on the street or everywhere. there are posters with them... they're like stars of the old hollywood, but they say these gods are powerfull and they know and they will feel if you don't fear them or hate them. i know there are no gods and that's only bullshit... i know that because i don't believe in them... and i don't fear them... i just hate those mother ******** that invented them. plus we have an army of damn robots to rule us... gods don't use robots to control us. they would use lightnings and sudden death and spontaneous combustion and ********... not a box of metal that shoots iron bullets. oh and they have special silver ********' bullets for werewolves and vampires. yes the human kind start believing in that crap again... what pisses me off even more is that they believe in Dracula... but they don't know who the ******** Anubis or Ares... or Mars were... So, you tell me if Gods do exist...

... And no... I don't remember how the ******** everybody got so retarded and we arrived at this point in which we hide from eachother so ferociously. i just remember that i woke up in the darkness and that i start digging and i was very scared that i will choke... and i kept digging and i was hearing voices around me... but there was just darkness and... and i was blind... and then i came out... i was burried somewhere in the ground and i thought that they burried me alive... but the ground was shattered from hundreds of us and we were not burried alive... we were all... dead... but somethin' brought us back to life... but the world... wasn't the world we left... there was just a dark sky and a barren land and a grey fog... and so it remaind until now... and I don't think it will change for many years to come... and yes... I'm old... more precisly i'm 3552 years old... so we're in the year... 5559... after the world war III...
PostPosted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 8:55 am


-waits for the rest-

awesomeness heart
[weird, tho...in a good way mrgreen ]

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Nyokai

PostPosted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 8:57 am


da blu moose
-waits for the rest-

awesomeness heart
[weird, tho...in a good way mrgreen ]


wow.. thx moosie... razz
PostPosted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 9:25 am


Thanks for writing for us Nuke.
"...And maybe we are worms and we eat the "dead body" of this planet..."

Good analogy. wink
A bit dark so far. Maybe there will be some hope for the future. question


"... but somethin' brought us back to life...
...and so it remaind until now...
...and I don't think it will change for many years to come.."

These parts makes me think there is hope. mrgreen

Mommi
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Nyokai

PostPosted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 10:35 pm


thank you smile mrgreen
PostPosted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 6:30 am


mrgreen You are welcome!

Mommi
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Missyellez

PostPosted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 6:51 am


it was about time my sweetie started writing again... like i knew she wanted to and like she used to along time ago. I'm really glad about it and I promise I'll keep bugging her to write more and more and post it here . Who knows, maybe we can improvise some sort of "book club" mrgreen

love you, sweetie
PostPosted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 8:20 am


YAY! mrgreen

Mommi
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fuzzy wulf

PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 8:30 am


Ooooooooo I like it. heart More, PLEASE?
PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 8:40 am


hehe... *giggles* thank you very much for reading smile blaugh

Nyokai


Renooa
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 10:57 am



Wow, Nukey. This a bit different and yeah, cool in a way. *nods* I'm waiting patiently to read the rest of it.

Pretty scary though and yet interesting. It's also very intriguing in the sense that there might be hope as what Mommi said.. or perhaps, everbody will die like a piece of crap scattered all over the place.. . eek
PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 11:15 am


Sits in a comfy chair in the corner and waits patiently for the next part. mrgreen

Mommi
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TexanAngel
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 4:00 pm



Cool Nukey!! It's so interesting. Yeah, it's gloomy all right but heck, it isn't boring at all.

PostPosted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 1:31 am


I think I'll post tonight the next part... or today from work when I have a bit of time... Thank you for reading... heart

Nyokai


Missyellez

PostPosted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 2:09 am


Good work, lovely... you good everybody up on their toes waiting for more of your writin'... porud of ya' heart
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