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watchdawg77
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 22, 2007 5:47 am


This is my first song fic and it's probably not the greatest but hey, i'll give it a shot. wink

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Komm berühre mich
Ich verliere mich
Denn ich spüre dich
Rette mich

As soon as I saw you with her in the café today, I knew it was finally over between us.

Ich erkenne dich
Und verrenne mich
Deshalb brenne ich
Rette mich

When you said ‘goodbye’ and walked out the door, I thought you were joking. We used to fight all the time; that’s what we did, but we still loved each other…I guess I was wrong.

Für all die jahre
Die uns einteilen
Für all die wunden
Die nie verheilen

I think back now on all the good times we shared, even the trouble w got ourselves into when we were young, our scars are proof of that.

Komm und nähre mich
Und vermehre dich
Ich verzehre mich
Rette mich

And I remember the first night we slept together, we wanted to stay like that forever.

Es verschlimmert sich
Ich erinner mich
Blute innerlich
Rette mich

When I got sick and sent to the hospital, you visited me and asked me to marry you, I was the happiest person in the world.

Für all die träume
Die uns entgleiten
Für all die ängste
Die sich verbreiten

But that was years ago, and about 100 fights later we split up…I guess good things never last too long.

Komm und erlöse mich von mir
Komm und erlöse mich

Oh well, maybe after tonight you’ll understand that I was still in love with you.

Für all die jahre
Die uns einteilen
Für all die wunden
Die nie verheilen
Für all die träume
Die uns entgleiten
Für all die ängste
Die sich verbreiten
PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 9:46 am


Ooo...I never thought about writing something like this! What a great idea!

wink And I liked it, even though it was really sad.

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 4:07 pm


lol...why thank you...i wrote it in 10 minutes and i wasn't sure if it was really all that good. sweatdrop
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