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Ghost of Threque

Eloquent Dabbler

PostPosted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 10:56 pm


The loathe that I feel for you
is more than mere words can convey.
Your existence pains my soul,
your face torments my dreams.
As a wake of suffering
sweeps out from your heels,
your majesty grows,
and love continues to flourish.

You lost a fair or two on your journey to the top,
but that's of no concern
to the high and mighty zenith
you call a humble home.

I hate your conceited walk,
I hate your cocky smile,
I hate your false charms that woo
even the sweetest flowers from their pot;
I hate everything you stand for.

And then, I shattered the mirror.
PostPosted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 9:11 am


Brava! Brava! surprised

I must say thatis more interesting then most Poems I see 3nodding

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 5:28 pm


Mmm... I'd say it seems more like song lyrics than a poem, but I suppose that song lyrics are a kind of poetry...
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