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 Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 2:03 pm
yea so i finnally drew some new pictures
and now i can show them off to people because i have a scanner again
my old one broke
soooooo
im going to post some of them here
feel free to comment them and add some tips or whatever
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Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 2:04 pm
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Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 2:05 pm
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Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 4:29 pm
It looks like you could really use a sharper pencil. Your art seems kind of messy because the lineart is so thick. Also, try going over it in pen and clean up the extra pencil lines. :3
The first picture is a bit unproportioned. The arms are skinny and the heads are a bit too big. And the way the girl on the left's leg is bent seems a bit too exaggerated to me.
In the second picture, the way you drew her arms, it's like they just end between her legs. They seem too short. Also, her eyes look too far back. You should try moving them up towards her nose a bit more. Maybe make the ear a bit lower? That might just be me being picky. x) But, you're doing good with profiles. heart
Overall, you could probably work on wrinkles in clothing. I do like how big their feet are- it looks like it's really part of your style.
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