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PostPosted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 7:04 am


Two men in white costumes sit at the ramen shop in konoha.
One of theme is me,Ichidan I take a slurp of hot ramen and the man beside me comments

Man: Thats loud think about the people around you!
Ichidan: OK, but no one else is here.
Man: My name is Umi. Im from the Hidden Mist village.
Ichidan: Oh but...Why are you here?
Umi: Im on an ANBU mission from the mizukage.
Apperiently there is an evil rogue ninja around here.
Ichidan: Oh well i'll help. That is if you want. We could get permission quickly.
Umi: Yeah, Hows that?
Ichidan performs multiple hand sings.
Ichidan: Kuchiyose no jutsu!
A large bird appears out of the smoke.
Ichidan: Ok, Sukai, I need you to send this scroll to the Mizukage and Hokage. Thank you.
Umi: Wow! I never seen anything like that!
Umi glears over to Ichidan whos eyes have turned bright red.
Umi (thinking): No it can't be. The Sharingan. Only Uchihas can use that. THERE EXTINCT!
Ichidan then looks back at Umi.
Umi: So, an Uchiha. Um, I thought...
Ichida: Nope! No at all!

NEXT DAY:

Ichidan returns from the mission with something in his arms. Umi had been killed by Ichidan.
A FLASHBACK:

Sasuke: Ok son, I have to tell you something.
Ichidan walks up to his father
Sasuke: You must never kill youre best friend.
Ichidan: Why?
Sasuke: You will live a horrible life as I did.
Ichidan: Huh?
Sasuke: Whe I was eight. My brother killed our whole family to recieve the Mongakyuo Sharingan. He also killed his closest friend.
Ichidan: OK daddy! Can we go visit Mommy now?
Sasuke: Yeah.
Ichidan and his dad walk to the graveyard and stop at a grave.
It reads, Sakura Horuno.
Ichidan waves at the grave
Ichidan: Hi mommy!
Sasuke walk to another grave and a tear runs down his eye
Sasuke:Na...ru...to...
The grave read: Naruto Uzumaki,
The sixth hokage after his father, Yondaime.

Lesson: Never kill youe closest friend.
PostPosted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 7:57 am


Even pretty flowers have thorns.
Absolute disastrous. Narrative speaker is not strong enough. Describe more about the place, setting, environment, surroundings, expressions. Gomenasai but it is not the least bit catchy.

Even pretty flowers have thorns.

Vaneli

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