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Anubis of CoG
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 1:44 pm


This thread contains all the entries from the first flatsale.

In order

Sejii
Oliveman
Nikorasu-Kun
Taichou
ginchael
Acinonyx_jubatus
Nauticah
PostPosted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 1:46 pm


Sejii
Entry!
Name: Arley Malfaisant

But you can call them: Arley

God: Iktomi (Lakota)

Looks: Arley is petite for his age, only at 90 pounds and standing at 4’9” with tan skin. He wears a plain, loose-fitting maroon sweater and severely torn blue jeans. His hair is straight, long, and black and worn loosely. In the middle of his forehead, his carries pyramid-shaped blue marks on his forehead, the first row having three marks. He does not have human ears, in their place are two long ears resembling the ends of a jester hat, a bell included on the end of each ear.

How do their godly traits relate to their god? Iktomi is the god of mischief, commonly known as a trickster. Jesters are also a popular term for tricksters, and are stereotyped for having the jester hat; Arley mimics this by having inhuman ears resembling these hats.

Personality: Arley is very calm for his age, and a persuasive voice and sharp tongue to follow the calm, allowing himself to be quite the con-man and negotiator.

Background: Born of a Crowd family in the Border east, Arley was noted as a trickster and con-man ever since he was able to walk and talk. Despite his upbringing, he was able to manipulate many of the rich to do his bidding with the promise of a future reward, which they usually got after a long while. Because of his persuasive lingo, he was dubbed “the Right Shoulder Demon” when he was five years old. Now at eleven years old, he has heard of the Game through a trusted source, and is curious.

Writing prompt response:

“Your character has just made their first "kill" in The Game. (Either literally or figuratively. Either way, their opponent is out of the game.) What is their reaction? Why did they do it and how? What are they doing now? What about state of mind?”

Something unexplainable… Why did Arley feel the way he did? It had always been a pleasure to manipulate the others in the opposing ‘armies’, but this time seemed to haunt him to no end. Maybe it was the rancid stench of blood that had recently filled the air, maybe it was the fact that it was a member of his team that had paid the price in his stead that unsettled him, but one thing was for certain: he had never been so disturbed in his life. His teammates soon gathered around the two bodies, mixed expressions on each face as one soon stepped in front of the jester-like boy, pure anger in his face as he spat at Arley. “Why?!” The angry boy bellowed at Arley. “Why did you make him go as a sacrifice?!” The jester-boy gave the other a calm, but stern glare.
“I didn’t make him…” He replied, the silver bells on her ears giving a slight noise as he turned his head. “He went on his own accord-“
“YOU LIED TO HIM!”
“You think he isn’t very brave for doing so?” Arley closed his eyes, shaking his head as the bells again chimed at his movements. “I told him he would be noticed as someone who was very brave if he went in my stead, allowing me to continue helping this army.”
“Until what?” The other started, seeming to calm. “Until you use the rest of us?” Arley gave the boy a blank stare.
“No, so I can help you all.” He knew that he couldn’t do that again, the death of a comrade that he was responsible for… He didn’t think that he could handle that kind of disturbance in his mind again. The other boy seemed to erupt into a rage as he gave Arley a powerful jab to the face. The jester-boy seemed to bow his head as he took the hit, his eyes closed and his ears drooped. He seemed to not even flinch as the wound started to turn red as the sign of internal bleeding. The boy hit him again in the same area with the same force, in which Arley endured without moving. He pulled back his fist for another hit, but was intercepted by another’s hand.
“He isn’t worth it, Jason.” The girl told him, pulling his hand away as she led him away from Arley. The others in the army seemed to follow the two, separating themselves from the boy. Arley raised his head as this happened, but soon acted as if he was following them as well only to stop at the two bodies. Slowly, but surely, he bent down to them, putting his hand on the old comrade’s cheek. Despite the seemingly touching moment of sympathy, the jester’s eyes jumped wildly around the two carcasses, searching for anything strange as he was left vulnerable.
“Don’t worry, friend…” He murmured into the dead teammate’s ear, a sincere smile on his face. “I will make sure that you won’t be forgotten…” As Arley talked to the corpse, a small girl from his army stood beside him, a sympathetic expression on her face as she extended a hand to Arley.
“That was a nice thing, to honor him even though you convinced him to die…” Arley turned his head toward the girl.
“Th-thank you…” He managed to fake out his tears. Maybe he shouldn’t have done so, but he needed some sort of ground to stay in that army. He took the girl’s hand, pulling himself up. “Just… A bit… Shocked, I guess…” He wiped his crocodile tears away, giving the girl a smile.
“I think we can convince the others to let you stay…” Just the words he wanted to hear.
“R-… Really?” He gave the girl a hopeful look.
“Yeah, it’d be easy, seeing as we were losing members left and right due to the enemy you killed…” She said sincerely, walking the boy into the army’s crowd, both ready to take on the others’ wicked glares as they continued…

Anubis of CoG
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Anubis of CoG
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 10:12 pm


Oliveman
Entry!
Name: Writ Campbell

But you can call them: Wit, people mispronounce his name and it comes out like that.

God: Coyote (General Native American beliefs)

Looks: Writ's about 95 pounds and 5'1 in height. He's on the skinny side of the body type spectrum. His black hair is short, but incredibly messy, never combed or altered except for the odd haircut once in a while. The kid's skin has a tinge of brown to it, giving him something of a light summer tan all year round. He usually wears a unbuttoned pinstriped button down shirt, all the buttons unfastened. Underneath is a white t-shirt. Writ's usually seen with a pair of baggy jeans

A few noticeable things about writ are his slightly pointed ears, which seem to be growing tiny, unnoticeable sand-colored hairs on them, what's strange about that is that he can move them, not just wiggle them, but... Flick them around. Which just creeps people out at times. His shifty eyes have a yellow-gold hue to them, which don't seem to bother people as much as the ear flicking, but people are always looking twice to see if the light isn't playing tricks on their eyes. There's also a slightly discolored birthmarks underneath his eyes, if you look close enough, it resembles something of long, slanted lines. (They get darker as the stages progress)

How do their godly traits relate to their god? Well, Coyote's... A coyote. So Writ has some slight features of an actual coyote. There's also a story about how the coyote has slanted eyes, so his markings and his eyes are like that.

Personality:

The rebellious child, a teacher's nightmare, Wit is one big distraction, he just can't stand still and do work, he has to scream some random thing out loud or pull off stunts to keep himself amused, or at least break the monotony.

Writ's fun to be around with, he just has a sense for it, he jokes and knows what to do to have a good time. Even though sometimes that sense leads kids through dark alleyways filled with stray, rabid dogs at times, he's only 11, you think he knows better?

Let's just say "Compassion" is something that he doesn't have, or lacks of, anyway. Writ will go out of his way to help someone as long as there's some form of gratification in return involved. He'll touch something that's clearly marked "Do not touch" to satisfy his curiosity. Put a whoopee cushion underneath the teacher's chair for a laugh. Anything that doesn't benefit him is seen as pointless, and otherwise useless.

Writ's very friendly to others, even polite, despite his greedy nature. Unconsciously, he knows that one day they might help him with something, maybe friendship will protect him from scrutiny of some kind, it never helps to be prepared. There's also the fact that friends provided information, something that he wants now more than ever. He won't get into a fight if he can help it, there's nothing to be had but a black eye.

There's always a hidden agenda in his actions, a lie somewhere, a misdirection, a plan within a plan, plans that constantly change and adapt at the slightest impulse. He plays by ear a lot, manipulating people and things with a witty tongue and a skilled mind.


Background: Writ's parents were they were Middling crowd twenty-somethings that had an accident during a particularly lustful night, they were young, enjoying their prime, as well as the small fortune that their coffeehouse have made.

Now they had a kid to deal with.

His family was very lax about raising him. They didn't want him to suppress his creativity or something like that, they wanted their child to stand out, to be idealistic, grow up to change the world somehow. His parents were real hippies. They let him do whatever he wanted as long as he didn't try anything crazy like jumping off their one-story house or going across the border. They rarely yelled at him, even in anger, they reasoned with him, and refused to let frustration get the better of them. Writ learned to talk the way he does now through his parents, and learned a few tricks, in return, his parents learned some of his tricks.

Writ always wanted to go somewhere, he never wanted to stay at home for long, heck, staying in any place for too long made him uncomfortable. If it was a trip to the grocery store, he wanted to come along, just walking down the street was a good enough escape for him. He often went with his parents to their work, they just couldn't leave the kid at home. Often, he watched the variety people that came in and out, from the slummers that his parents handed out free leftovers to, to his neighbors that frequented the place, to the occasional high class rich. His parents would sometimes let him help clean up the tables and make some of the drinks, because you never knew when brewing a Mocha Latte would come in handy.

Then Writ went to school, and it was torture. Working on math problems and fill in the blank sentences wasn't fun at all. Even worse, they wanted him to bring work with him and do it at home. He hated school, because it was always the same old thing day after day. So he decided to do something about that... He pulled some stunts off, from jumping onto a desk and screaming "PINK MONKEYS!" To throwing kids' shoes on the school roof, to starting the school's first food fight, his pranks quickly became the talk of the school. It made him popular with many of the students, who only wished they had the kind of guts he had. The teachers on the other hand didn't laugh at his antics. He's so much of a discipline problem that he sees the principal at a regular basis, even if he didn't do anything. His parents said during parent-teacher conferences that they would fix those problems, but they've just been too busy with their own business to really do anything about it.

Right now, Writ's in a slump, he's done everything a kid could possibly do, he needed something new, something to satisfy his need for variety. That's when he decided he was going to be part of the game, it was mainly an urban legend amongst more informed students, but Writ was convinced that it was real, that kids like him were doing these amazing things that he keeps hearing about. With vague rumors guiding him, he's determined to join the game.

Writing prompt response:

Prompt B:

Wit casually strolled through the sidewalks Commerce Corridors, stopping occasionally to look up and marvel at the huge buildings. It was strange to see a kid his age wander the streets like that, but he was ignored by many of the businessmen and women, apparently talking in their cell phones about where to have lunch was more important than him. When someone would stop and ask where his parents were, he would lie and say that they were right behind him, they usually didn't press any further. What could you say? You didn't expect kids to outright lie their elders.

It suddenly occurred to him that maybe he shouldn't be here, at least, not in the open like this. He remembered the rumors he heard about the Upper parts of the city, about men in black suits chasing after kids like him, and when they got caught, they were never seen again... Writ paused and thought about this, then shrugged, and kept going. They were only rumors. He wasn't going to let a bunch of words scare him into hiding. So he kept sightseeing without another thought. Wit went down to the next block undisturbed, right until he bumped into a tall man, and he wasn't just tall, he was big, REALLY big, from Wit's point of view, he could easily be mistaken for just another office building. The giant towered over him in his plain black suit held by broad shoulders. The man's ominous presence that made Writ feel uncomfortable

"Excuse me." Writ said quickly, swiftly sliding out of the way.

The man only gave him a passing glance.

Writ went at a faster pace, he looked over his back, was he what the rumors were talking about? Perhaps he had a right to be scared, the man was following him.

Wit didn't need any second beckoning, he ran into a large crowd of people crossing the street. He looked behind him again and sighed with relief. Lost him.

He went along with the crowd, and stayed in the cluster until everyone dispersed in their respective buildings. It was not even a second until the man in the same black suit appeared. Their eyes met, and Writ's eyes widened, this was no rumor, the man really does follow you.

There was only one thing he could do, run. Where? He didn't know, he just knew that he needed to lose that man. He struck an idea, digging back into something he learned back in first grade... He went up to a random woman, she looked nice, she wore a business suit like most people in the Commence Corridor. Probably going to a big meeting of some kind. He went up to her.

"Um, could you hide me?" He asked, in the sweetest voice he could, pulling at her sleeve.

The woman took a moment to find the source of the voice, then she looked down on Writ, "What is it?"

"There's.... There's a bad man following me." Wit said, pointing to the blacksuit.

A lesson he learned in school is that when a adult is being mean to you, you should go to another adult and tell them, preferably a policeman or your parents. Nether of them being there at the moment, Writ had to settle for a complete stranger.

The woman looked at the man in black.

"That tall man over there?"

Wit nodded urgently, the look of true fear in his eyes.

She looked at Writ with a calculating eye of a self-made businesswomen before she said, "Hold my hand."

He obeyed, not having much of a choice at the moment. The lady dragged him block after block, until it looked like that they had lost him. They took a second pause to catch their breath, but there he was, right in front of them.

The lady only gave him a look.

"What do you think you're doing with my son?!" She yelled, the outraged tone of her voice already attracting a onlooker or two.

She didn't stop there, the guy got pummeled by words, apparently at the mercy of the woman, the amount of onlookers grew larger and larger, people were taking pictures as if this was some kind of street performance. Writ was looking on in awe himself, his mouth wide open. The lady used words that he didn't know, but he just knew that they were harsh, he wanted to do that, to beat people with words like her.

When she was done, the man just ran. The woman straightened her tie and a round of applause and cheers erupted from the crowd, she made a small bow before dragging Writ and herself off from the scene...

Wit smiled, "You talk really good!" he said to the stranger.

"Speak well." The woman corrected him, "And thank you."

"How do I do it?"

The woman paused, and said, "When you have to fight your way up a corporate ladder full of Neanderthals, it comes naturally."

Wit didn't have any idea what that meant, but he kept that in mind.

"Where are your parents?" She asked, looking back to see if that man was still there.

"They run the coffee shop at the corner of Mid and Cor." He responded truthfully.

"I'll walk you over there" The lady said, "Just be careful next time, I won't always be around to save you from the bad men."
PostPosted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 7:31 pm


Nikorasu-Kun
Entry!
Name: Seth Cooper

But you can call them: Seth

God: Aah, Egyptian God of the Moon

Looks: Seth is quite skinny by anyone’s measure, it’s not like he doesn’t eat much, he doesn’t want to most of the time, ”If your not hungry there’s no point in eating” after all. He has long pure white hair which reaches the middle of his back, he has it pulled back into a ponytail, aside from a few loose strands which hang over his forehead. His skin is quite pale and sensitive to the sun; he can’t spend too long in open sunlight before becoming quite sluggish because of this. His eyes also follow this pattern, being an incredibility light shade of blue, almost to the point where his iris’ blends seamlessly into the whites of his eyes. Though, probably the oddest trait he’s gained from his God is a pitch black birth mark on his right shoulder blade, which is shaped like a crescent moon.

How do their godly traits relate to their god? Aah was most often depicted as a Crescent moon, and too a lesser extend a man bearing that symbol. Seth is like this as well, with his crescent moon marking. And his pale, moon-like qualities of his hair and skin add to that.

Personality: Seth is rather melancholic at the best to times, it takes a awful lot of sway his emotions one way or the other. (Or rather the impression he gives off of his emotions) His patience and tolerance to irritating things is seemingly infinite. At least the up side to this is he practically never gets angry or looses his temper.

When he deems things as uninteresting, he does it utmost to ignore and avoid this thing or person, unfortunately for the rest of the world, the vast majority of things and people fall into this category. Hates having to do things he thinks are pointless, usually uses some logical argument to avoid these things.

He does come across as very cold and callous towards others, particularly with his stuck up opinions towards most “commoners”. He tends to rub people the wrong way with this attitude, and can drive even the most tolerant people. He is, however, very polite to people he respects, most notably he addresses his parents as “Father” and “Mother”.

Background: Seth has lead quite sheltered life, seldom has he ever left the grounds of his own families house. He family where part of the rich privileged few, because of this, he was tutored at home. The main reason for this was his own appearance, it was no secret he looking odd. But it was not because he parents thought him a freak that they kept him from the outside, but because they though he was unique, and would avoid him potentially getting hurt on the outside at all costs. This inherent lack of social interaction is what probably led to his melancholic nature.

Due to this rather sheltered life, he has a quite a warped view of the world outside of the Rich sect. Since all his knowledge of what the majority of what the cities population are like comes purely from the opinions of other members of the Rich community. But it is this that leads him to be intrigued by this “Game”, in comparison of the monotony of his tutoring and life indoors; it seems, “interesting”.


Writing prompt response:

Prompt B

Prompt B: Your character took a shortcut through Uppers and now has a "blacksuit" following them. How do they deal with the situation?


It had been some 30 minutes since the streets had stopped looking familiar. Not that Seth had ever been similar with many of the streets much further than a few blocks from his family’s house anyway.

“Hmph”

He muttered under his breath as a few more people bumped into his shoulders as they walked past him. That was probably his own fault, he certainly looked suspicious between his pulled up hood, and the scarf, virtually all his face was covered up.
In was night, the set had only set several hours ago, but now was the right time to go and find out about this “Game”. He preferred the night over the day after all, the day was too warm and too bright for his liking, the soft lights from the street lights and cool evening breeze where far more comforting than any afternoon stroll.
Surely it would be hard to find out where this ”Game” was held, or how it worked, right? All these working class people shared stuff like that with each other; “Gossip” was their word for it, correct?
He pace grew steadily slower as his confidence in his own navigation skills started dwindling. Things certainly weren’t going anything like he had hoped it would. Where would he say the night? Or eat the next morning? From what he heard from his father, he certainly didn’t wan to eat the kinds of things “Commoners” did.
He took a left out of the main street, into a narrower side path, for now, he needed quiet to think, and did not want to be interrupted by the masses. It was odd, he heard footsteps behind him, someone else entered the path too, there was no reason for anyone else to come this way that he was aware of. He glanced back over his shoulder to check.
It was some large, fairly tall man in a suit.

“Way to look conspicuous in this part of town.”

The stranger stopped at Seth’s glance, well; at least he knew why he came this way. Since Seth had no knowledge of them, their activities, or even what they did to people like him, he gave talking to him no second thought.

“Is there something you want?” he said tonelessly as he turned around. The stranger stopped in his tracks, he definitely didn’t look like he expected this development. He remained silent for a few, very awkward moments.

“Well?”

Whatever he wanted, he wasn’t at liberty to discuss it out in the open. Seth turned back and walked towards the end of the path, where it met back with one o the main streets. Just before he reached the street, something tugged hard at the back of his jacket. It was that guy again.

“Let go” Seth struggled, to get out of his grip. Was this going to be it? He was going to get killed or something equally horrible. He should have never have left home, he was an idiot to come this far, not without knowing what he really was, or what was going on beyond the comfort of his own life. He panicked, the only thing he could do was jump out of his jacket, without he hood his white hair being displayed to all as he ran as fast as he could across the street, into some other alleyway out of sight.

He crouched down nearby some discarded boxes; it was going to be a long and cold night.

Anubis of CoG
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Anubis of CoG
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 8:08 pm


Taichou
Name: Ciro Hammurabi

But you can call them: Ciro

God: Shamash,, being the god of sun and justice in ancient Assyrian culture, was typically known for having a four-tiered, horned headdress, rays of light coming from his shoulders, the rod and ring of authority, and a tiered skirt. As he is sun (And in effect, light) his powers of justice are said to miss no criminal. Shamash ruled in a trio with Sin (The Moon) and Ishtar (The Storm).

Looks: Reference.With blonde hair reaching down to his shoulders (Flipping in in the front, and out in the back) and bangs to his cheek bones, Ciro clearly makes no effort to try to tame his hair (as that would be near impossible with his four sets of horns). Following Shamash’ four tiered headdress, Ciro has four sets of horns; small numbs up top; longer, sharper, almost draconic backward facing horns below those; spiraling ‘ram-like’ horns framing his face; and then small, nubby horns on the bottom of his skull pointing out.

How do their godly traits relate to their god?
In ancient Assyrian culture, gods would be noticeable by a four-tiered, horned headdress; Ciro’s horns are in direct reference to these. His hair and eyes are warm colours associated with the sun, and his shoulder markings are reference to the idea that sunshine emits from Shamash’s shoulders. For now, the scars are simply scars, but in later levels, they may glow.

Personality:
Ciro is, more or less, a very bitter, sarcastic, and cynical person. He seems to rebuke any and everyone who oppose him, and despises too many things to count. He prides himself on being more intelligent than his peers, and likes to loathe and angst like a regular teenage. Because of his differences from the rest of the human race, he feels alienated; rather than just hating himself for it, though, he is more than willing to hate the world as well. If one was witty or strange enough to hold his attention long enough to consider him a 'friend', it would take a good deal of cracking through his emotional barriers to be able to actually earn his trust. Because of his past, he has severe issues with trust and abandonment, and would quickly reject friends or fight with loved ones just so that he would not be rejected himself.
His relationship with his foster parents is virtually non-existing. While they wish to do what is 'best for him', he takes it as an attempt to make their lives simpler and an unwillingness to accept that he is not a normal child. He resents them for this, and rebels at any moment he can. They see his rebellion as a call for help, and repeatedly try to help him with neurological appointments, anti-depressants, and mass therapy sessions. His foster parents feel that because of his physical deformities, he should not go outside except for doctors appointments and therapy so as to protect him from harassment and embarrassment, however Ciro simply sees this as though they were 'ashamed' of him and that they do not want anyone to know of his existence.
His relationship with Shamash is far less complex. Complete and utter rejection are a few words to describe Ciro's feelings towards his god. He thinks that Shamash has long ago gone insane, and that he is far too bent on the concept of black and white rather than shades of gray. While he passionately hates Shamash, Shamash feels a sort of fatherly vibe towards Ciro; he feels the child is misguided and with a (un)healthy dose of (Extrordinarilly) tough love, the boy will finally learn just what truth is and begin his righteous path.

Background: ".... 'Chih-roh'? Is that how it's pronounced?"

It was a new face, but the same situation over and over again. A therapist cocked an eyebrow over her horn-rimmed glasses as she tried to figure just how to pronounce such an exotic name. It was more than simple to recite the explanation for the young boy seated on the lumpy and obviously cheap couch opposite the woman.

"Actually, it's 'See-roh', it's Italian."

While Ciro had thought it was humanly impossible for the therapist's eyebrow to raise any higher, it did. "If it where actually Italian, it would be 'Chih-roh.' A 'c' sound is usually a 'chi'--"

"All right, all right. Are my parent's paying you to analyze their pronunciation skills now?"

She coughed, clearly embarrassed to be rebuked by a twelve year old. And one with such strange extremities at that. "Point taken. Would you like to begin, then?"

"And just where would you like me to begin?"

"Why don't you just... start and the beginning... and when you get to the end, stop." Her face contorted into a look that proved she must have thought that comment was very witty. In reality, she was merely quoting another person's effort.

"Right... Then. How about I start when my birth brutally mangled my mom's body and both mentally and physically traumatized her? Then we can move on to how their carelessly abandoned me in a large pile of feces and garbage. After that, I'm sure the fact that Satanists raised me for the first six years of my life can factor in, and then later we can glance over how my obsessive-compulsive foster parents require me to be pumped up with drugs and sent to a therapist twice a week in order to 'normalize' me despite the fact that I have grotesque deformities sprouting from my head and cannot leave the house? I think once we've skimmed over that, you can realize that you're really quite screwed and nothing is going to make me into a normal child. You'd be better off, really, to just give up on the work and pretend we're making progress; it's much easier that way."


Writing Prompt Response:
“I really hate you, you know?”

In the process of quite possibly the mother of all self-loathing festivals, Ciro was at it yet again. Despite being seemingly alone, he clearly felt the need to express his endless hate for whoever cared to listen; or so it seemed.

“Honestly, now. Beating up adults was not enough? Now you’re going after kids who play with cards. ‘Gambling is a sin.’ A sin to play ‘go fish’ for a soda, I see.”

Was Ciro talking to the corpses littered about him? It would be unclear for quite some time. The kids were innocent enough; even Ciro had tried to join in their game. Of course, though, once his ‘severe case of schizophrenia’ kicked in… God knows what would happen- and God alone.

Three boys; three victims, honestly. They never stood a chance from the start. Ciro knew that; he knew that if Shamash was able to take control that he would ‘cleanse them of their sins’. Ciro had often waken surrounded by unconscious victims of his other half’s redemption. Before, however, they were adults. Before, they would wake up. While his earlier victims were usually beaten to an inch of their life, these boys didn’t even have that luxury. They would not be getting up. They were eternally saved from sin, sent to Sin in the underworld.

Was it just irony that that an atrocity against the gods would be the same name as the father of all gods? Was it a need to conquer sin that drove Shamash on, or a drive to defeat Sin? Ciro had long given up on trying to understand the voice in his head, and just assumed himself insane; that was the very reason why he had hid himself away in the downers. The less victims, the better. And yet…. Already he was covered in the blood of others.

Was there honestly no way to escape the killing? Was it his fate to pursue those who embrace evil? Such philosophy was past the boy, and now… is one true hope was to hide. To get away, to run from others and suffer alone. But such things are impossible for a child—he needed others to survive. Already a pounding migraine had started to beat at Ciro’s mottled mind, but at least Shamash had slunk off to gloat over his victory over those who sinned. Those horrible children playing; sinners who could not be redeemed unless by death.

There was no way this logic made sense. No matter how it was sliced, there was no way that some kids playing could be considered evil. And what of Ciro himself? Was he not also playing cards with them? Was he not also a sinner then? Why should he alone by spared by an otherwise ‘unforgiving’ God of Justice.

And now, now he had committed the worst sin of all; murder. By killing those kids, he was no better than the lowest of scum, and why was he to be saved? Surely one so powerful as a god would have the resources to pick other avatars. Why was Ciro the one to be left standing? Should he not be destroyed with the others?

Who was he to pass judgment on sinners when he had committed the worst sin of them all?

Spoilers! (In White)

In the process of the RP, Ciro will more than likely have a crisis with his right to judge others and Shamash's demands. As such, Ciro's original design had him without eyes because he tears them out. Since that happened around the age of 16, it would not have yet happened in the time of his entry into the city! As such, all the reference of him with no eyes (And usually looking slightly older) is because of this. But don't spoil the plot! That's just something planned for much later.

PostPosted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 2:23 pm


ginchael
Entry!
Name: Lennon Albert Carver XIV

But you can call them: Len, Lenny, Lennon if you are trying to be formal about it

God: Cthulhu (I did ask Silvy if this was okay and she confirmed it was)

Looks: Len always look sick. He is very pale, almost pure white with greasy black hair that is always slicked back. His most striking features are his blue eyes, which resemble the deep ocean, and a dark mole on his right cheek. He is about ten years old.

After he begins the game, however, he is has two pairs of very small green tentacles on each side of his mouth.

How do their godly traits relate to their god? According to the Call of Cthulhu short story (and Wikipedia lol), Cthulhu is said to have influence over dreams and telepathy. I’d like for Len to have the ability to “escape” into dreams. For example, say he’s badly injured after a battle. To escape being killed, Len would have the ability to enter a nearby sleeper’s dream to recover. He could stay in the dream as long as the dream lasts, then jump to another’s dream. Dreams can seem hours long but only last a few seconds—as a result, he could spend literally years and possibly decades hopping around people’s dreams in one night. However, he can only appear in the dreams at first, not change things in them. He is essentially an observer

Ideas for later powers and appearances would include: minor, non-godmoddding telepathy (essentially, a small selection words and actions in other people’s RPs that he wouldn’t necessarily understand or know about IC); the ability to create his own dream-worlds without human help; putting people in dreams (both his own and others); creating dream-prisons for his non-touched enemies; the ability to manipulate the dreams he is in; the ability to pull creatures and people temporarily from surrounding dreams; the ability to gain strength from consuming untouched souls; and, of course, the whole horrible Lovecraftian tentacled beast look. (Note—none of these are set in stone. Just ideas and brain-vomit for later on.)

Personality: Len is very quiet and very shy. This Rich child has been molded all his life by the conformities of upper class culture: he cannot speak out of turn, he must be dressed as his parents dictate, and he cannot actually be a child. Many times, he acts like a small business professional. His psyche is very fragile and he is constrained by what other people think of him.

Background: Lennon was born to an old and powerful political family that is deeply rooted in tradition. Before he was even born, his entire life was put into place: he was given the traditional family name; a spot was reserved for him at several prestigious learning institutions; he was named as the heir apparent of the political position his father held; deals were being worked out between other powerful families to see whose daughter Len would eventually marry.

Even after his birth, his life was just as planned out. After he was born, he spent 1.5 years with his wet nurse, then another 2.5 with his developmental advisor, then 5 years with his early childhood tutor, then began at an expensive mid-level academy. By the time he was 10, he was spending 7 hours a day in school and all the time after that in Uppers society training. It didn’t help that he was bullied in school to go home and deal with some of the bullying tutors there.

Then, one day, he heard a rumor from some of the kids who bullied him in school. There was a game going around, the new cool thing to do. There was this little flower shop, down in Middling, where you could join. Anyone who did join was guaranteed to be popular.

The next day, the bullies and Len snuck out of school and traveled down to Middling. Outside the shop, Len was given an ultimatum: go into the shop and sign the bullies up, or be beaten up outside.

So Len entered the shop…and disappeared off the face of the Earth.

Writing prompt response: Prompt B

Len hadn’t been to Upper in several weeks, not since he entered the flower shop and leaving his old life behind. He wouldn’t dare show his face up there, not with these…THINGS dangling from the side of his mouth. They were disgusting green fingers, reaching and exploring and violating; Len thought of them as fleshy insect feelers, taking in the world around them. Most disturbingly, they didn’t even feel like part of him—it was as if whatever god had claimed his soul was also claiming his fragile, frail body.

Len pulled his hoodie tighter around his head. Normally, he would have been thrashed if he was ever caught in the common clothes of The Street…but the nervous young player was really bound by those rules anymore. He needed some money, fast, and Len knew from experience that most of the city’s money was stockpiled amongst the various Rich in Upper. He just hoped he wasn’t recognized.

Taking a deep sigh, the young boy stepped out of the sunlight, his hood strategically covering his face and bag of small trinkets he hoped to sell over his shoulder, and started to walk to the central government complex.

As he walked up the sidewalk, exposed to pure sunlight for the first time in weeks, Len glanced at the people on the lining the side and selling their wares. Back in his old life, when he was heir apparent to his father’s power, he never really paid attention to the salesmen on the side and had been told by more than one tutor or nanny that they were pure trash. Now, though, he was going to become one of them.

Len wondered what his parent would think if they ran into him, selling cheap trinkets between a peddler of pirated pornography discs and an exotic tobacco dealer.

“You! Boy! Do you like comic books?” an old man with a thick Street accent called at Len, seeing a potential customer for his cheap merchandise. He held up two comics in his thick, meaty, sweaty hand. “I got some of the best! After, Children of the Gods, The Nine Wonders…”

It was when Len took a step forward to look at some of the old and decrepit comic that he noticed, out of the corner of his eye, there was a man a little further up the hill in dark sunglasses and an equally dark suit peering at him.

Blacksuits.

Len started breathing heavily.

Now calm down, he thought to himself. You’ve heard of this before. The Blacksuits. Don’t draw attention to yourself. Just walk back to Middling.

Feigning less-than-interest, Len walked as casually as he could to the counter with the smiling man, pausing only a few seconds before making a right turn back down the hill.

“Yes, I’ve got the best selection this side of Upper!” the man said jovially as Len approached. When he made his turn, however, the smile instantly vanished from his face.

“Hey! HEY! DON’T YOU LIKE COMIC BOOKS?” The man started to walk after him, screaming at the top of his lungs.

Great, Len thought to himself. He allowed himself a slight turn, just to see where the blacksuit was. He covered his mouth (and tentacles) with his hand, to protect himself.

The blacksuit was slowly moving through the crowd, shoving the walking people aside.

Len turned back around and walked faster.

“Aww, forget you!” The man screamed at him, finally giving up right before the blacksuit shoved him aside.

The small boy shuffled through the crowd, reaching out with his mind. Although it was midday, there had to be someone still asleep, someone who could possibly still be sleeping through all this noise and the bright sunlight… Len was desperate.

Suddenly, he felt it. Someone…someone was asleep in one of the buildings. His stubby tentacles reached out, like a slug noticing the presence of food. But the dream was too far away, barely reachable. Len had to get closer.

He turned back. The Blacksuit was about 50 feet behind him and getting closer, more violent, more desperate.

This was his only chance at survival. Len began to run.

It was probably the most exercise Len had ever gotten in his life. His heart was pounding, he felt like his lungs were aflame…every part of him felt the single animal instinct—protection of self. Honestly, it was a rush.

His hood flew back and Len became vaguely aware of some horrified screams and shouts. It didn’t matter; for those few minutes, it was just Len, the Blacksuit, and the glowing alien warmth of a dream, his only protection.

He turned his head again. The Blacksuit was only two people behind him, arm reaching out for the back of his hood. He turned his head back—

Suddenly, part of him felt…at ease. Warm. Content. Len saw the world around him fading, the look of shock and disappointment and horror at the Blacksuit’s face, fading into a strange alien landscape.

He turned back. There, standing in a decorative nightgown was a little girl, looking at the strange tableau her mind had conjured up.

Len fell to his knees and caught his breath. He was safe…for now. Next time, he would be more careful.

Anubis of CoG
Crew


Anubis of CoG
Crew

PostPosted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 3:43 am


Acinonyx_jubatus
Entry!
Name: Justin Bursar

But you can call them: Jubs

God: Hermes, Messenger of the Gods, God of Athletics, Travel, and Thieves, among others

Looks: Jubs is a little short, around 4'5". He has long, scraggly brown hair, which is usually pulled back and held in a ponytail with a dirty strip of cloth. His features have a slightly angular quality to them, including a hawkish nose, which gives him a predatory look. His eyes are a normal brown, but have an intense glare to them. He has a lean build, though it's more because he's underfed than because of a natural build. The clothes he wears are very dirty, and have several tears in them.

Instead of normal human feet, he has paws, complete with blunt claws, similar to a greyhound or cheetah, though they have no fur, and are the same color as the rest of his skin. There are pads on the bottom of his paws, which are tough enough to handle running through the city without causing injury. Because of this, Jubs has no need for shoes, not that he could find any to fit him anyways. On his ankles, and on the sides of his head, there are small white and brown feathers growing.

How do their godly traits relate to their god? Hermes was the Messenger of the Gods, unsurpassed in speed. Jubs' feet give him better traction, and are more suited to running than a normal plantigrade human foot. He can run extremely fast for a human, and he doesn't get tired from it as others might. Hermes was always depicted wearing a winged hat and winged sandals, and the feathers growing on Jubs imitate this.

Personality: After being abandoned by anyone he has ever put his trust in, Jubs has become bitter and angry, far beyond his years. He's come to despise the normal humans, envying their natural forms. Having lived in the slums for so long, he is devoid of manners and tact, and will do whatever is necessary to survive. While still living with his gang, he had made some good friends, and but after being kicked out, he broke all contact, even with those who had spoken up for him. Most people will find him quiet and sullen, waiting for an opportunity to leave their presence, and glaring daggers at their backs.

Background: Jubs was born to the Rich, and for the first four-five years of his life, lived in privilege. It was then that he started to manifest the traits of his God. More concerned with their appearance than with the welfare of their son, Jubs' parents dropped him off in Middling one night. Left to fend for himself at such a young age, he wouldn't have lasted long were it not for a gang of street urchins that took him in. Despite his physical deformities, he was welcomed into the gang, and soon found a place stealing food, using his incredible speed to his advantage. It was there he was nicknamed Jubs, a combination of his first and last name. For several years he lived with them, eking out an existence in the Downers, which could almost be said to be pleasant, or at least as pleasant as it could be down there. Recently though, the Blacksuits had begun to follow rumors of small boy with inhuman feet, which started to point to the gang. Finding it increasingly difficult to obtain food due to the presence of the Blacksuits, the gang decided that Jubs leaving was they only way the rest of them could survive. And so Jubs has once again found himself ousted due to his appearance, this time from the lowest dregs of society. What then did that make him?

Writing prompt response: Prompt B.

He was running. He was always running; it sometimes seemed to him as though that was what he had been doing his whole life. Of course, this time was different. They'd set a trap for him, the Blacksuits. It had been a while since he had made a run into the Uppers, but the vendors in Middling had gotten wise to him, and packed up their goods as soon as he was spotted. Now hunger had driven him to the Uppers, something he would never normally attempt on his own, but it wasn't exactly as though he had allies he could go with.

They'd been waiting for him, set up in a false vendor shop. Someone from his old gang must have tipped them off, the b*****d. As soon as he'd grabbed a piece of bread, several Blacksuits had appeared as if out of nowhere, and gave chase. He was faster than all of them of course, his strange feet and unnatural vitality saw to that. But it was an area he was unfamiliar with, and he'd quickly become lost. It became apparent that they were herding him, blocking off any routes that would lead back to the Downers, and forcing him to go where they wanted him to go. Nearly every time he turned a corner, there was one waiting for him. Luckily for him, there was a new house under construction, and he was able to slip in through a hole in the fence.

There was a small alcove formed by some stacked blocks of stone he was able to squeeze into, and for a long time he hid there. After several hours, it seemed as though he had eluded capture. Thinking himself free and clear, he made his way towards the hole he came in by, only to be spotted by a Blacksuit that was engaged in searching the construction site. Jubs felt a pang of hopelessness as he realized he would be caught before he could work his way all the way through the hole in the fence. The Blacksuit slowly advanced, forcing Jubs into a corner. Soon he found his back to a wall, and in vain his hands searched for some sort of exit. What his questing hands found instead was a heavy length of lead pipe leaning against the wall. Deciding the only way to escape was to fight, he suddenly grasped the pipe and ran forward with a cry. The blow landed on the Blacksuit's face, who was too surprised by the sudden rush to react. Powered by Jubs' quick running and years of abuse on the street, the Blacksuit was dead before he hit the ground. Jubs didn't stop there, and continued to be the Blacksuit until it was unrecognizable as human.

Breathing heavily, Jubs dragged the heavy pipe behind him, away from the construction site. As soon as he was free of the fence, he once again began to run, back towards the Downers, Back where he could be alone again.
PostPosted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 8:49 pm


Nauticah

Entry!
Name: Carren Rowa Máirín (Máirín is pronounced MAH-reen)

But you can call them: Crow

God: Morrígan

Physical Appearance (AKA Looks): As a human, Crow is just shy of five feet and weighs around 95 pounds; in other words, she is essentially just a normal ten year old girl. When she’s ‘switched’ to her monstrous form, she gains about six inches and fifteen pounds—the additional weight is for the leg muscles, wings, and tail-hair. Her hair is short, save the super-long bangs that hide her left eye, and two long locks of hair in front of each ear, the left being longer than the right. Both her hair and tail are dark copper, her wings black as a crow’s and tinted red rather than blue, possibly due to her natural hair color. Her legs, when morphed, are covered from the knee-down in short, coarse reddish-brown hairs. So are her hands, when morphed, from the wrist to her black talons. Her eyes are dull blue with a dark olive rim when she’s normal, mint green when she’s not.

How do their godly traits relate to their god? The goddess Morrígan is a shape shifter, often taking the form of a crow, but also a few other choice beings at will. Shape shifting is a radical ability to undertake, and especially more difficult to master. Thusly so, Crow sometimes takes on two or three forms unintentionally. Her most common mishap is wings of a crow, legs of a calf, and tail of a wolf. She also gains the abilities of each animal, as Morrígan may have herself when she would shift. In the most common case, she can kick as hard as a heifer would, have the scent and hearing of a wolf, and (eventually, once her wings grow) fly and have the eyesight of a crow.

Personality: Often mistaken for a monster, Crow is defensive and skittish as a wild cat. She finds difficulty in trusting anyone, probably due to being nearly skinned by a dozen fathers when she’d accidentally maim one of their children. Known to be self-centered, Crow only cares about things that affect her directly, the rest is up for everyone else to handle.

Background: Crow was brought up in the Border district, the end closer to the City thankfully. With two older brothers, everything seemed fine for Máirín family until Crow turned eight. A few days after her birthday, Crow was playing with her older brothers when suddenly she was knocked down, and cried out in pain. She cried out because two wings had sprouted, and they were just squished painfully on the ground. Her brothers were dumbfounded, her parents were shocked; Crow was speechless for two weeks. Unfortunately for the Máirín family, the mutations would only get worse.

Rather than causing her family grief, Crow ran away. First she tried to escape to the desert, but her brothers came to rescue her after two days. Eventually after many failed attempts at a desert-run, she fled to the streets.

Writing prompt response: Prompt B: Your character took a shortcut through Uppers and now has a "blacksuit" following them. How do they deal with the situation?

The quickest way back to the Border was through the Uppers, at least if you had started from the harbors, which she had. Crow knew it was probably a damning idea to take the shortcut, but daylight was approaching. She had managed through the Corridors without too much fuss. It was still 5 AM according to a clock she seen through a window of a bank, so she still had an hour to play with before things would begin to show life. At least, she hoped; daylight was never a good thing for Crow.

Clomp, clomp, clomp, clomp her hooves clicked and resounded against the stone streets as she dashed across the face of buildings, sticking low and close to the plentiful shadows of dawn. Clomp, clomp, clomp, clomp she continued. Crow rounded a corner, and stopped for a moment to check for any other sounds or shadows that hadn’t been there before.

“So far, so good,” she muttered under her breath; her tail wagged for a moment before she dashed off again.

Some time had passed; she was now in the thick of the Uppers. Clomp, clomp, clomp, clomp—tap—clomp, clomp, clomp—tap—clomp; clomp, clomp, clomp… Crow curled around a corner pillar and waited, she knew she heard something. Tap-tap, tap. “Ugh!” Just as she thought, something was out there. She stopped cold and pushed her miniature wings against the pillar, trying to rest against it as tightly as possible. Tap-tap, tap-tap; footsteps! Her heartbeat began to race, her two strange fingers curled into a ball. This had been a horrid mistake to come this way, and she realized it all too quickly. Her tail curled under her cowardly, biting her lip and hoping that the next few taps would be farther away rather than closer.

Unfortunately, those next few taps came quicker than before and progressively closer as well.

“Where are you, kid?! I saw you! You know it, too!” a gruff voice called out. Crow turned her head to the building across the street. It was one of the few buildings that were more like a shop than an expansive bank. A glass window made up the front, a glass door was to the farthest right. A flock of pigeons were in front of the door, picking away at the ground. Crow gazed into a window across the street. The glass was clean, and reflected only a part of the street on which the sunlight had began to bathe with the dawn. In the partial reflection was a large man running parallel to the building, and he was in a black suit. Before she could a better look, he walked into the shadows. He’s close!

She threw her head the other direction. A small gap was between the building whose corner pillar she was pinned against, and the next. A large garbage canister stood at the right side of the short alley; a good hiding spot, possibly? Without much else to do, she turned her head back to the pigeons and slammed her hoof down.

CLAP! It was loud enough to echo off the buildings, and scare the birds into flight. The man stopped; she knew because the tapping had stopped for a moment. His loud footsteps started again, and he was heading across the street; she knew this because the sound of the tapping had changed slightly from a regular ‘tap’ to more of a ‘click-tap’ from hitting the uneven stone road—the road was more for decoration than actual use.

She made a mad-dash to the canister, and curled up behind it. Her tail bent the wrong way and shot pain through her spine, but she couldn’t yelp or whine.

“Where the hell did that kid go?” the man in black grumbled loudly as he turned back around. He was heading back in her direction to check the alley, she knew it. She shut her eyes tight in fear, tears welled up and her muscles tensed.

Suddenly her muscles relaxed, and she couldn’t figure out why. She opened her eyes… something was off. She looked around, and everything seemed the same, but she knew it wasn’t. She then realized it was her own nose; the little fleshy ball that was there before was replaced by a long, reddish-brown snout of a dog. She glanced down, and rather than seeing her own body, she saw the reddish-brown paws of a dog of some kind, and a white belly as well. She stood up, and realized she had somehow changed. How did that happen?

She didn’t get much time to ponder such. A throaty ‘huh’ came from above. Crow glanced up, and the man in black towered over her. His heartbeat was fast, and he looked downright aggravated.

“Just a dog…” He growled, and with that he turned and walked away. Crow waited until she no longer heard the tapping of his shoes, and then padded on home.

Anubis of CoG
Crew

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