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 Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 10:43 pm
i shall have one up soon.
i just thought id tell you all.
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Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 6:46 am
Oooh. I look foraward to reading it.
I think I may post one soon too.
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Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 10:51 pm
oh my bod,im so lazy.
im basically writing this thanks to some inspiration from katie.
i was sitting in bed thinking of it.
but.....i never wrote it down.
i HAVE to write it this weekend.although,i still dunno much past a couple paragraphs.
i shall introduce my characters i guess:
bob bryar
the rest of MCR[less frequesntly then bob though]
the rest are below!!
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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 8:01 pm
THE CHARACTERS!!!!!
amelia starrz was the girl bob was crazy for.she had black hair with purple highlights.she was a year younger then bob.she wasnt annorexic or skinny like most girls wished to be.she wasnt fat though.she was average.her sense of style was beyond any other.she was a punk,but very fashionable.she didnt care about fitting in fashions.she loved to stand out.the girl who turned heads simply because she looked different.her passion was painting.she met bob at a show in high school & fell in love with him.when MCR started & bob joined,she was always there supporting.both of them fell in love at first sight.it started out as a secret though,but soon enough,they decided to tell their friends.
lisa vanegas was franks girlfriend.she was a natural blonde whos grades where one of the highest in her class.she loved punk music,but was judged by her peers.her passion was chemistry & she played bass amazingly well.she was a popular girl & everyone knew her.when she first met frank,it was way before bob met amelia.she was in a local new jersey band & she had played at a show back when MCR were a local band as well.she met them at an after party.she hit it of with mikey immediately and they always played bass together.then she truly met frank when mikey invited her to rehearsal.she thought he was unique & she loved his energy & enthusiasm.somehow finding the couage,she asked him out.it was shy & awkward at first,but after long conversations & a couple more get togethers,they began going out.
rays girlfriend was brought to rays attention because she hung around when lisa & amelia came to watch MCR.at first she was just there & she listened,but soon ray developed a crush on her.he told mikey & of course mikey told gerard.one night gerard was a tad drunk & being the showoff center off attention he was,he rudely announced that ray liked her.she was a couple months younger then ray.her name was marilyn hart.she had her own fantasy world and "over the rainbow" moments.she had short straight brown hair.she loved to wear hair bows & ribbons.she had black "emo" glasses.
IGNORE THIS!its for me.
g77[29]
r77[29]
b79[27]
m80[26]
f81[25]
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Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 8:51 pm
the tour bus pulled into the driveway.
its almost noon and the black graffitied punk tour bus turns heads.
ray at the wheel.
mikey asleep in the back.
gerard reading a comic.
frank obsessing about his eye makup,
and bob at the computer,completelt clueless to his surroundings.
you see,the members of my chemical romance were heading to the house of amelia starrz.she was the girlfriend of bob.
today was her birthday.although bob didnt know it,he was going to surprise her by showing up at her house.
at the house awaited lisa and marilyn.they were amelias best friends.this whole thing was planned by them.
amelia on the other hand was on a shopping spree.she was actually IMing bob from her phone.
bob:happy birthday beb.
amelia:thanks.the only think its missing is you.
b:aww.i miss you too.
a:when are you coming back?
b:i wish i knew.were on the road to who knows where now.
a:arent they lucky...
b:dont be that way.you know i love you.no matter how far away.
a:i love you too!aww my mum is calling.ill call you later.bye.
b:bye.ill be waiting.<3
amelias heart melted when she answered her mom. bob,for the first time since the drive,looked out the window.the place was oddly familiar,but just to make sure he asked gerard "where are we going?".
"somewhere....*smiles sneakishly*"
"gee!!"
"youll see.trust me,itll be fun.just go back to the computer!"
"ah whatever"
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Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 5:28 am
This is interesting so far, good start. 3nodding
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Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 2:42 pm
Hazardous Flowerbed This is interesting so far, good start. 3nodding I agree!
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Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 8:33 pm
aww!! thank you. im glad you guys like it.
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Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 9:45 pm
"gerard.come in here.do i look okay?" frank calls from the bathroom.
as gee approaches bob yells "why are you so into the makeup today.i know youre crazy,but todays an exception.you act like you have a date."
it strikes him then.franks gf[lisa]lived where amelia did.and they lived....here.where bob was going!
"yay yah frank.you look fine.lis-the fans are gonna love it."bob hears gerard say from as he returns.
*ring*
amelia is calling bob.
"hey.miss me?i hope you werent waiting to long."
"yah.i did.alot. i would wait for you forever."
"im heading over to marilyns.somethings going on.i can tell.does ray know anything?"
*bob mumbles to ray who replies to "shut up & do not blow it"*
"umm.idunno. but i have a surprise coming to you as well."
"aww.you shouldnt have."
"no.you deserve it.and i know youll love it."
"what is it?"
"now that would ruin the surprise,beb.im have to go now & get it ready.bye.i love you."
"bye,love.love you too."
*click*
mikey woke up while bob was on the phone.
ray gets him to drive & he approaches bob.
"you didnt tell her did you?"
"no.i dont even know whats going on!"
"oh.well basically were going to surprise the girls for amelias bday.marilyn & lisa are throwing a surprise party."
"oh wow.thats awesome.i cant wait.so,theres no show here?at all?"
"nope.just partying"
"no wonder franks such a crazy today.i better get ready.how far are we?"
"*chuckles* umm.....45 minutes.im going to get ready too.mikey get out of those pjs!"
all the boys rush to get ready.frank,who by now is done,driving.
in the 45 minutes,the boys are all ready.they are 3 minutes from the house & mikeys phone rings.it was lisa asking where they were.
she was on the way to get amelia.she was 5 minutes away.
the boys made it & hid in the dark room.
2 minutes later,the door handle opened and everyone yelled "SURPRISE!"
amelia was extatic with happiness & when she saw bob she kissed him passionately and held him so close never wanting to let go.mikey hugged & had welcoming conversation with lisa.while frank stood by playing with her hands & hair.ray & marilyn were being very awkwardly shy & gerard was laughing & watching them with interest.
he walked over to the radio,put in their newest CD & everyone began to dance. gee & mikey danced with more of amelia,marilyn,and lisas friends.
the party ended & everyone left.
everyone went to sleep & then a bit of confusion struck.
would the boyfriends sleep with the girlfriends & the brothers together?
or the boys & the girls?
argument began with the boyfriends being protective & the girls wanting to sleep together.
out of nowhere,an awkward silence took place & a strange sound was heard in the living room.
frank,who had woke up very early out of excitement & spent so much time with looks & then dancing,was on the couch slightly snoring.
everyone laughed & then shushed eachother.
marilyn got some blankets & covered him.
marilyns parents were on a vacation so their room was available to sleep in as well.not trusting anyone,marilyn decided to sleep there.feeling a bit weird about it,she asked ray to sleep with her,who said yes of course.bob slept on the floor because he had offered & ray & marilyn saw no reason why not[as long as rayne said,he wasnt "in the bed".]
lisa didnt want to sleep with another boy so her and amelia slept in sleeping bags with frank in the living room.
gerard & mikey shared marilyns room.
by the time his was planned,everyone was exausted & in no mood to argue.mikey looked at the clock. 12:17.
12:30 bobs phone vibrated telling him he had a text.
it was amelia.
a:lets go out.
b:now?where?
a: oh idunno.anywhere is amazing with you.
b:thats sweet.
a:so thats a yes?
b:alright beb.ill be right out.
a:seya soon.
bob changed back very fast,slipped out the room & headed towards the living room. amelia had her back turned to him & she was still changing.she was taking off her pajama pants.
bob was a bit surprised at first,but then he showed up behind her & kisses her.
"omg bob!i didnt know you were here."
"yah.you do now.nice underwear[its not perverted!!].i think gee was gonna get me those for xmas.none in my size though.=["
"let me finish!"
"its okay.i dont mind.continue.*still in the room watching with a smile on his face[a not perv one].*"
"are you serious?oh fine!"*quickly finishes getting dressed* "lets go before anyone notices were awake"
as he glances back he catches a glimpse of the clock 12:42
they walk out the door,closing it silently.
"you gonna tell me where were going?i mean you live here."bob asks teasingly.
"i think its your turn for a surprise."
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Posted: Thu Mar 08, 2007 8:09 am
Whoo! That rocks! Keep going!
heart heart heart
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Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2007 6:12 pm
xBroken.Beaten.Damnedx Whoo! That rocks! Keep going!
heart heart heart aww.thank you.
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Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 6:12 pm
im taking tad break.
im at a suspenseful point in the story & im really not sure where to go with it.
also i need pics for amelia,lisa,and marilyn.
if someone would help,it would be much appreciated.
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 3:33 pm
i cant continue my story until my characters have pics.
i have one for marilyn.
i need one for lisa & amelia.
its very hard to find a girl with purple/black hair.
HELP ME!!!
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Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 3:36 am
Heyy!
Love it! And thanks for the comment on my fan fic, I'll have the next up soon, I promise.
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Posted: Tue May 22, 2007 8:06 am
bleeding unicorn i cant continue my story until my characters have pics. i have one for marilyn. i need one for lisa & amelia. its very hard to find a girl with purple/black hair. HELP ME!!!
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