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 Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2007 4:00 pm
I have a friend this really describes right now. I wrote it for me, but I think I might give it to her. Can you give me any tips on how to make it better?
Unwanted
Unloved
Unable to tell
Am I the girl in the background
Or the charm in your spell?
Do you really care
Or couldnt care less?
This I am Unwilling
Unable
To test.
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Posted: Thu Feb 15, 2007 1:26 pm
oh your here! *Huggles*
and it depends, under what qualifications does she fit? and with what purpose would you give it to her?
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Posted: Thu Feb 15, 2007 1:52 pm
It's simple yet beautiful, do what feels right with the poem...
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 10:22 am
Valentine's Day = rofl
I love hate how sappy people with boyfriends and without boyfriends get.
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 11:35 am
Good poem, but it should be in our poetry subforum.
So I'm going to move it there.
But the rhyme scheme was a bit odd, I must say.
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Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 8:16 pm
V-DAY SUCKS! aka singles awareness day grrrrr gonk domokun xp pirate talk2hand cheese_whine
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