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 Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 4:53 pm
hello and welcome to my creative writing help and tips page. this is for everyone who wants to either be a writer, needs help with ideas or topics, or anything to do with creative writing. as for me, do not take me lightly. im only 14, but i have a college-level writing education according to the board, or so theyve told me. anyways feel free to ask away, mostly please pm me because it is hard to talk to so many people on one forum.^^ oh and just because i have such a high writing education, that doesnt mean that i can spell corrrectly!!!lol
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Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 6:34 pm
Mind providing us with a sample of your "professional" level writing? neutral
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Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 4:49 am
nothing would make me happier. ill show u the start of my book that im writing. the name must be witheld until i publish it.
Time:uknown. among the desolate and deserted war-torn streets of a now barely existant new york, skeletons of the dearly departed are unceremoniously scattered among the crater-filled sidewalks, huddled around the ones that they tried to protect from the immenant ending. their lives had come to the pivotal point in their existance: protect those of whom are dear to you. so, huddled around their children and family, they died. but now, a new breed was allowed to blossom forth from the debris. a new knowledge, a new species of human. But no, these were not the everyday human, they were the new....remnants of hatred.
thats just the start of the book. its about 150 pages long typed so far. tel me if u wanna hear more.
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Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 4:02 pm
dont suppose i could get a copy of that to read could I... it sounds good. ^ ^
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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 2:31 pm
*nods* The book sounds good. If I may make a suggestion, I've been writing since I was about old enough to hold a pen and the thing that has helped me portray emotions the best is Role Playing. No, really. Onlie written role-playing has been invaluable to me and has really improved my writing.
I plan to put a teaser up for my book soon. I will be posting a fanfiction here today.
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Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2007 7:49 am
hmm yes runescape has influenced alot of roleplaying over the years. mostly it jsut gave me a sense of humor from having a battleax nearly decapitate me everytime i walked under a window. and id be very glad also to give you all a part of the comic to my book^^
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 6:30 am
Could you give me any hints for developing my characters further, I need to figure out how to do that so that everyone knows exactly who my characters are ^_^.
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 9:39 am
I also am writing a book, though I am just in the drafting staage! I have to change the prologue because it is kind of confusing! Do you think you could give pointers!
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 2:09 pm
Your book sounded... interesting. I'm not sure if it would be up my alley though. What genre is it?
I'm a fan of a lot of different stuff, I'm going through a very Vampiric mood at the moment (mood swings makes sticking to one story very difficult).
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 10:41 pm
Ok frist of all if I sound like I'm getting "smart" with you I'm not. So anyways I have many you wouldn't call books but writings the last time I check about 50+ unfinsished and 90+ poems, along with just about 5 story that are "skelatons" in away that I'm stuck on now and I need some help on delovoping my short stories into something that's better on the mind when people read, I've always started out with the same chartcter name on all them if I can't think of one at the time and my editing sucks, if there is a way you could help brush up on my skills it would help deeply, I'm told I have publishable matrail and have had many offers from publisher and all the only thing that is holding me back at this time is having a little meat on my stories, if you want to read any of them feel free to browser my website link most of them are poems which most would say is my strength but I'd rather write out a long story with indepth detail and all that jazz, my biggest project at this time topping 350+ pages is a book by the Name of Elelmental Series, though the name may change later, well more than likely will, for now only my prolouge at this time seem to be the only thing I can seem to agree I should keep, this project is being worked on with a best frined of mine that has always wanted me to write a story about her and me and how different we are, but yeah now I'm rambling all I need is a opintion on what you think and some tips on how to make it different from the rest out there at this point in time. Being a writer has always been my dream since i could pick up any kind of writing thing and I wish to make this one come true. Thanks for your time to read this whole thing, please and thank you.
~Vimpire~
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