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 Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 7:27 pm
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Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 10:39 pm
Man, cite your sources. Please.
Also, it definitely could use some editing. And, y'know, full-bodied paragraphs.
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Posted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 11:26 am
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Posted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 12:16 pm
Also: lol @ wikipedia plagiarism.
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Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 10:13 am
By Inari.. Dont put the subject above what you decide to define. Put it into a paragraph. Its not an essay unless its like that. Jeez, punctuation, some grammar reforms, cite your sources, and just overhaul the whole thing really.. DONT turn that in for a grade on anything..
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Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 2:15 pm
O.K. ... Why don't you write it next time. You know, instead of taking it from Wiki.
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