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beautiful.mistakes

PostPosted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 2:07 pm


Is it because of
my brown hair?
my green eyes?
the way I walk?
the way I talk?
the clothes I wear?
my smile?
or the way I tie my shoes?

Is it because
my skin's not smooth enough?
my hair's not shiny enough?
my eyes arn't colored dark enough?
why?

Okay, I see
it.
It's me.
Friendless
dreamless
hopeless.

Just
a broken toy
pushed aside.

Sparkle left its' eyes.
"Hate" carved in its' heart.
Life left its' soul.
PostPosted: Wed Feb 14, 2007 2:19 am


Very VERY good biggrin !!

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beautiful.mistakes

PostPosted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 11:13 am


Oh...why, thanks! whee
PostPosted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 4:19 pm


On scale of 1 to 5 I give it a 10 for its creativeness

blackmage102


beautiful.mistakes

PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 9:56 am


blackmage102
On scale of 1 to 5 I give it a 10 for its creativeness

yay!
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