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The Underground



Marz walked down the narrow tunnel corridor and saw light up ahead it was brighter than the small luna-spheres, small moonlike orbs of light used by mages and elementals, in the corridore so he walked faster towards it. When he reached it he was in a lare cavern filled with medium sized lunaspheres and in the center of the cavern was a small ponde with subterainian fish in it. He reached up to his headset and said,"Guys, follow the homing beacon to me i think im close to where we need to be."

Marz is about 6' 5" and is 16, wearing all black and a leather jacket with an eye with a star in it on the back. He is an elemental, he can control the elements, because of this above ground he is ranked very high but he doesnt want to live like that. Ever since the Great War the humans had been practically wiped out and those that remained were hidden or being dictated over by the High counsil of elemental lords,like himself, and Mages. He himself had been in line to become a high counsiler but he wanted peace among the races.

The first to arrive was Alis Cardmaster, a tall Mage with long silver hair even though he was about 17. Alis wore red and silver uniforms and a black leather jacket with a hand of cards with an aura around them on the back of it. His favored weapon was his deck of cards to which he was always making "additions".

He was followed closely by Mordecai Griffonwing and Marty Griffith. Mordecai was a strong Human who was the lieson between this group and those who lived in the ruined cities above ground. He had short brown hair stands 5' 3" and his jacket had a griffon with its wings spread wide on it. Marty is 16 and the last vampire. He stands 5'9" and has A biohazard symbol on the back of his jacket.

Mars smirked at them,"Mordecai would you mind catching some fish Alis would you help him? Marty come here since we know how you feel towards water."

Mordecai and Alis set to work on the fish and Marty walks over looking a bit shaken,"The rats here are bigger and stronger than the ones above ground and i was in a tunnel full of them."

Later on the fish were cooking over the fire marz had summoned while he and marz had discussed the perils of living in the catacombs. Mordecai looked around," I think the rats are fine."

Alis was shuffling his deck absent mindedly,"What do you think we will find here?"

Marz looked up And grinned broadly showing his fangs,"Probably something that the up worlders would die to have."

Thanks im glad you like it. Ill try.

thanks...I actually already wrote this part more but its not here im posting what i remember and adding on...

oh, and try to keep the verb tenses the same
((influence of Mrs. R))