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 Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 3:27 am
You're all pretty good at poetry, but have you ever thought of a rap battle style improv contest? We had a topic like this in another forum I was in, and it was fun to see random rhyming trash talk posts. I like to think that i won, cos i was the last person to post there, but it may be that everyone got bored. So, what do you say? you wouldn't win anything but it would be fun.
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Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 6:21 pm
You want us to be posting in
Some kind of rhyme and rhythm scheme?
I'll go for that, if I can use
The natural thing: iambic theme.
I write in it the fastest, see,
I don't know you: but that's for me.
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Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 6:23 pm
Rhyming couplets eat my heart,
They're really a selective art,
But sometimes I can manage them
If I refine, and leave a hem.
Oy vey, these images go on
For way too long: I ought be gone.
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Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 9:45 am
not so bad
for Nopey newbie
just kidding, love ya
i swear im not on doobies
You can do it freestyle
any timinmg you please
but its gotta rhyme dude.
Are you down on your knees?
Are you ready to take me on?
You think so?
Cool, so bring it on!
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Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 3:20 pm
The competition bows its head, I sense,
To us, its masters--here is evidence:
I've come again, and rhyming couplets stream
As if alligned by something Else Supreme;
Such ease I sense in writing in these beats.
(Indeed, threads such as these are mental treats.)
How was your day today? (may I inquire
What is your scholar's class (your grade or age))
What is the job to which you might aspire?
What is your trade: the ear, the written page?
I'd like to hear of you a little more:
I haven't read too much of yours before.
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Posted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 10:41 am
well whats to say, im a crazy fool
im into poems (duh) and acting's cool
Id like to be an actress or
someone who entertains for sure
Im in year eleven, i'll be 16 soon
and like i said im a bit of a loon.
I love rock music and shania twain
Jackass, Gaia and Mika's refrain
All in all im a bit of a freak
So thats me bubba, and how was your week?
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Posted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 3:06 pm
My week's been depressing I'll say
it's hardly been a holiday
I got no job
I got no money
I just had to break up with my honey
But I still got hope
I ain't no dope.
I'm sure things are gonna work out right
cause I've decided I'm gonna fight
against the hurt against the pain
rise up, fall down and start again
That's me in a nut-shell,
my personal hell.
Know I wanna know
What's your story-yo.
Peace out.
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Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 3:26 am
well good to see
some more fresh meat
Sara-anne im Mimm
thats the meet and greet
I got a day off
cos its snowing bad
just hope my gig isn't cancelled,
hope like mad!
im going to see (live!!)
Bowling for Soup
perhaps they'll
let me join their troupe
dreaming of fortune
dreaming of fame
Mad madam Mimm
yeah thats my name!
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Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 8:00 pm
You can dream of dreams;
All you want,
but here comes one great debutante.
Fame;
Money;
Dont mean a thing to me,
as long as;
I get to love my one true baby.
So when the time is right,
I'll improv all night,
Because I dont rhyme for anyone
But yours truly!
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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 1:51 pm
Yeah how ya doin
nice ta meet ya
I'm Sara-ane, owner of this little meet-up
hope you're having fun but I must confess
in this little corner of the word,
I ain't been doin my best.
Life caught up with me
it's hard you see
But I'm back now
and you'll get the best of me.
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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 6:15 pm
When I walk in the place these fool step aside
my rhytmes wash them up like the tide
I'll show all yall how it's done
i'll Shine so bright I don't need the sun
VA boy but I still A-town Stomp
weak rhymes will get you knoked out from the jump
and the girls say they love my humps
My friends all say i'm cool
but they know I won't be their fool
if ya got a problem come tell it to my face
yea, just call me the ace of space
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Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2007 3:23 am
Ace of Space, dude you gotta be kidding
Well i may seem like a little kitten
but im just waiting gettin ready to pounce
And then boy you won't weigh an ounce
cos i'll smash your mind to tiny bits
with my random rhymes and crazy s**ts
but hey, we shouldn't fight so much
cos if you do you get stuck in a rut
hey Sara glad to hear you're feeling better
But i'll rule this thread from now to forever
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Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2007 5:05 pm
COME HARDER.. THIS WON'T BE EASY
no body says this boy's sleezesy
I'll rock the mic all around the world
and I'm going to down a noche girl
You said when your done there won't be an ounce
well I'm ready to conter-pounce
see now i am ready to attack
but we don't got to go there and that's a fact
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 3:59 am
I'm sad to come so late in time,
My week, I guess, has been alright:
'Was sick for one day, but now I'm
Much better in the human sight:
I saw the holocaust memorial
And then my grandma had her burial,
So I've been something of a nervous heap
(Lord, all these things give me the creeps...)
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 4:23 am
aw, nopey, dude how sad for you!
deepest condolences this much is true
i'll give you a hug ive kept close to my heart
but love'in aside, let the rap battle start
SJ i dont think i said you were sleazy
I mean i could dude but it'd be way to easy
Yeah i'll feed the birds in Linkin park
but my bite is just as bad as my bark
cos everybody says so
i could beat dicamillo
cos im not afraid
to show you just how im made.
By the way SJ you know im just teasin
cos im hyped up by englands li'l rainy season.
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