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Lucky Lucifer Vice Captain
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 Posted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 11:13 am
4 bars min 8 max
No feeding recycling biting
Whoever accepts chooses who goes first, but if you want to go first make it snappy.
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Posted: Sat Feb 03, 2007 5:44 am
Since you made this a while ago and I see you have been waiting, I'll help you out and accept.
I also choose for you to go first. mrgreen I'll reply ASAP. Feel free to PM me as soon as you've posted a verse so I'll know.
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Lucky Lucifer Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Feb 03, 2007 8:47 am
I'll disrupt your mind with graphic nightmares
Causing twightlight scares and raised hairs
Richoeting rhymes, rebound from all angles
Manhandled, my lines go striaght like triangles
I'm the update, the h bomb, your atomic
Running rings around you, more than 1 so poloyphonic
Similar to sonic, flowing at the speed of sound
Can't hear me, but see me beat your skull into the ground
Silent but violent, a murder with no remorse
Consent was made present and so for violence there was cause
R.K.O - Rhyme, kill, obliterate, so real
I'ma do it once more make sure this legend is killed
As you wake at your wake, no mistake,
yet as you lay dead, your body still aches
Your hands still shake at the sound of my voice
But you brought this on your self man, you did have a choice
burning_eyes
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Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 7:25 am
A crossdressing Lucifer who tends to pathetically pose
as little girls - from the original to Emily Rose,
Call me grandpa, 'cuz time is mine,
So one time for your mind and I'll leave you kinetically froze,
Through these verses I know that you synthetically grow
'cuz a ghost writer only proves that your intelligence blows,
Purpose of this circus of lines is to reverse your lies,
Rebirth of lives, I shine the heavens' light,
Now scream Satan: "AUGH! My eyes!"
Edit: It took a day too long for me to respond, sorry about that. Also, that last line was basically feeding, but I doubt anyone would have been able to tell had I not mentioned it here.
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Lucky Lucifer Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 11:22 am
Line made sense on it's own, not really feeding.
Vote!
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Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 11:39 am
As far as lyrical content and wordplay both were eqqual so i gots to giv it 2 mak on flow he added that unique flavor which gave his pnuches more style and intensity
VOTE: Makairo
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Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 3:53 pm
Lucky Lucifer Line made sense on it's own, not really feeding. Vote! Really? Your verse ended with a burning_eyes When you take your mouse and have it hover on screen over that specific Emoticon, you'll see that it's called "AUGH My Eyes!" Makes no sense? Not really feeding? Use basic thought before claiming that a young man named Legendary is wrong.
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Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 9:34 pm
Nice drops.
No i'm not voting, I'm too fly for this s**t.
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Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 1:18 pm
SilverSpyder Nice drops. No i'm not voting, I'm too fly for this s**t. You're about as "fly" as I am, you ********. And I ain't no ********' bird.
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