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 Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 10:43 pm
More like a fire, than like the sun.
More like a tomb, than a party.
The silence crept.
Waking the deft, aiding the blind.
More like a nightmare, than like a dream.
More like a shadow, than the light.
The silence moved.
Screaming in the ears of those who would not listen.
More like a scream, than like a whisper.
More like a typhoon, than a small splash.
The silence ran.
Knocking over everyone who was not there.
More like a bullet, than like a feather.
More like a killer, than an innocent.
The silence ran.
Taking over me.
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Posted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 2:06 pm
Wow. What an amazing poem. I could totally feel the weight of the silence you described. Marvelous job! heart
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Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 12:12 pm
Haha! Yay! Thank you! I thought it was okay. But.. yay! That makes me happy! I'm very glad you like it!
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Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 2:03 pm
It's a great poem. I like the way you discribed it. mrgreen
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Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 12:46 pm
Thanks!! heart blaugh rofl
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