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My World And Shredded Wings [C+C]

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Deadside Dreams

PostPosted: Wed Jan 31, 2007 4:03 pm


Burning through their smiling masks
You look at people and you see lies
The add in the paper says
“Lost. Please return my paradise.”

Forget the world around you
And let your town burn down
Feel the doctors pound you
As you’re going down

Your life is going to go to Hell
And all your days will suck
Put reality on a back burner
And go off to get skull ******** the worlds and empty stage
And you’re the star in your own show
But no one comes to see it
Sold out, on your way you go.

The world will make demands of you
That you just can’t complete
The world will beat and stand on you
But will you admit defeat?

Because you know you’re going down
And you know your gonna die
But you’ll never have to worry
Because our brains are gonna fry

No, you’ll never have to worry
If you never even try
But angels who live in apathy
Can never learn to fly

I love the feeling of being chained to you
I’m always what you ask me to be
I really don’t have any choice at all
My fear of losing you compels me

I’m the wingless angel
And I’m the game that’s played
I’m the loyal servant
Who never gets his pay

Please undo the punishments
Just be kind in the things you do
Please love me like your only one
The angel who shredded his wings for you
PostPosted: Wed Jan 31, 2007 8:27 pm


OI really like this poem a lot and the way you ryhemed was really well put lol

AlaskaYoung

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