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SquishyMuffins

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Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 4:16 pm

|Candy| Red |Porcelain| Doll

Look at them all
Pale white
My thoughts call
Candy red
As pretty as a porcelain doll

I have to have them
I have to have them

Dancing gaily at the ball
Hidden in shadow
Their curls bounce
My eyes won't tear away
From those beautiful dolls

I have to have them
I have to have them

Pretty gowns in colors of all
Cotton candy spinning
Like a sugar high
As I watch
Those pretty dolls

In the center, like a Queen
The one dressed in red
Beautiful and pristine
Like a coveted and rare doll
Rosy
Candy red

Pulse, pulse, pulse

Under the pale veil
It flows
And goes
Calling my name

Without a word
I call to her
She comes, gliding gracefully
Across the floor

A beautiful doll
Satin silk
Glazed over eyes
Eyes that see all
Eyes that see nothing

Pale white against darkest black
Shone down
Strike

Pulse, pulse, pulse

I want you
I need you
I'll bleed you
I'll bite you
I'll hold you
I'll drain you
I'll kiss you
I'll kill you

All for that sweet elixer

Look at you
Pale white
Through the glass
Candy red
Lying on the floor
All dead

All pretty and pale
In a pool of crimson
Candy red
Sugar high

Skin like porcelain
Eyes like glass
Like a pretty little doll...

A doll that is mine.

Just a little thing I came up with.

Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 6:24 pm

Hmm...

This was odd, but not in a bad way. There's just no other way to describe it.

I like the transition, from sounding very much like a child in a toy store (repitition of "I want it, I want it") to being very morbid and posessive at the end.

Spastic waffles
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SquishyMuffins

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Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2007 12:33 pm

Spastic waffles

Hmm...

This was odd, but not in a bad way. There's just no other way to describe it.

I like the transition, from sounding very much like a child in a toy store (repitition of "I want it, I want it") to being very morbid and posessive at the end.

Thanks ^^

I was inspired by the melody of Tommy Heavenly6's Lollipop Candy Bad Girl and the Nightmare before Christmas and some other stuff.

I was wondering if anyone could actually get what I meant. I mean, I want to know if any one knows who the narrator is or what the narrator is?

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