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Smiling Jak

PostPosted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 1:02 pm


[Name:] Number 63

[Age:] 26

[Time of Death:] August 12th 2005 12:01 P.M.

[Gender:] Male

[Race:] Human-Reanimated

[Blood Type:] Artificial

[Height:] 5'10"

[Weight:] 180 lbs

[Fighting Style:] Berserker

[Appearance:]

Number 63, as he is now known, skin is quite pallid this is caused by the extensive time he has been deceased. His muscle mass has been electroshocked and steroid abused to put him in peak physical strength. This is made quite obvious by the lack of clothing he has. With only a loin cloth that reaches down to his ankles, and sleeves of a long shirt which reach up and cover the top of his upper-body. Giant scars crisscross his heart, lungs, kidneys, liver, abdominals, everything of importance. This is a direct result from the modification of them to the point where they allow for life, but not enough to sustain it. Around his arms and legs are sheets of metal that are similar to armor, but do not serve that purpose. They are strong enough to withstand physical blows, but not firearms, etc. Each piece of metal that is fitted around his appendages can lock up with a combination of springs and metal pistons. Meaning, should one break or be utterly shattered from trauma, these can lock up the appendage and allow him continue fighting: albeit with a slight decrease in efficiency. The weight of these sheets of metal impacts his fighting very little, as his mind was retooled to counter for the weight issues, they are only thirty pounds altogether: made from steel.

A his head has been heavily modified. His hair was been removed permanently to reveal Number 63's naked skull. There is also a bar code that has been tattooed upon this empty plot of flesh. At the back of his skull, there is a high degree of modification that has been made from what it should look like. It is almost made up of entirely metal, where various electronic probes and pieces of machinery have replaced the dead tissue. A total of six ports are visible at the back, where plugs can be inserted for various functions. The feeding of information, the transition of it, killing him off again, bringing him back to life, replacing the synthetic blood, etc. A redundant core of three CPU's built into the dead man's skull provide his source of intellect and decision making. Otherwise, he would be a wild and untameable monster. This is also the source of where his knowledge of hand to hand combat spurs from. The eyes and ears of Number 63 have also been removed and replaced with superior (not dead and useless), mechanical instruments that are on par with a perfectly healthy persons. Except that they grant him normal vision, night-vision, and thermal. His nose is completely gone, as are the nasal cavities, they have since been covered up with the skin and flesh from the nose. Thus, scars of where his nose once was is there, but not the actual nose itself.

Around his fists and up to his elbows are gauntlets with a serious amount of hardware. Hardware in the sense of an incredible amount of very sharp spikes. The same goes for his shins where instead of gauntlets, there are shin-guards virtually layered in spikes that are several inches long. Along with their being spikes, there is a one more very lethal piece of weaponry on, or rather in, the gauntlets. Hanging near the very end of the gauntlets are two (one on each), are oval, spiked balls of metal that would be more commonly found on a chain mace. A few links of decent sized steel chain hang out from the small loop upon the balls themselves. Each one is propelled through a coil and spring trigger which throws the balls forward at an astonishing speed. Roughly two and a half feet of chain sit inside of the gauntlets, more so the forearm, ending at the wrist. These keep the weapons in both a nice and controllable state, while giving him range. Due to the addition of this device, his gauntlets are quite thick all around. Also, around his throat is yet another piece of spiked equipment. This one like the others has been constructed from steel and has signs of a weld upon the back. Thus, it it cannot be removed without removing his head.

Situated upon his back is a sheath that holds one thing, a thick metal pole that is roughly three and a half feet long, and an inch and half wide. This pole is constructed from steel and used to brutally beat people to a pulp. Given his nature, and what he is, this weapon is the perfect weapon for him to use besides his fists. Number 63 is an all around undead beast that is perfect for in hand to hand with an animal persona of brutality.

[History:]

The beginnings of Number 63 starts with a secret government project to use all of the valued traits of the undead. These of course are incredible resilience, untamed rage, lack no conscious, and have inhuman strength and speed. It is said that the undead are unkillable, this is not true, once they die... they become something else entirely. An creature of the undead will not know it is dead, even if you shot it right in the heart, tore out it's lungs, blew it in half. The only true way to kill one of the undead, is to blow it's ever loving head off. That is precisely why militarizing and controlling undead specimens became a black operation with code-word secrecy. The project was known as Thanatos, for the Greek God of Death. Several hundred million dollars were poured into the project, scientists who were knowledged in fields of cell rejuvenation, redevelopment, motor functions, and brain patterns were called in. Several possible ways were considered on how to create the very first true undead. Would they use a biological virus to kill and revive? Or would it be done in a more Frankenstein manner? After years of trial and error, it was decided that a little of both would be needed, and that cloning could not play a part in this.

They needed subjects, fresh ones, so the government began a very hush-hush suicide campaign. Where they would research on the people who were manic depressive, had attempted to kill themselves before, etc. Then when the moment was right, they would have them killed. Always in the most gentle of ways, and least damaging to the body. Bodies would be swapped so that no loved ones would get curious, an accidental mix-up with whether not someone was to be cremated or buried. And then within hours of the death, the body would be in the very safe and caring hands of the many scientists, doctors, and engineers working on the project. For each successful resurrection and reanimation, the undead would be given a number and then would be put into a state of cryogenic sleep. This is of course all of the necessary modifications are made to their brains and organs. Allowing them to survive repeated freezing through convention means, and not have to worry about permanent muscle damage.

Each Number is given a specific job, meaning some are tooled for assassination, others are molded to demolition, a couple are mobile gun turrets. Number 63 was given the task of assassination, to be able to kill a large number of people in close combat and not have to directly worry about their welfare. In the case that one of undead specimens should be killed on a mission, a specially built thermite bomb has been placed in the abdomen of each undead. So, in the case that the computers in it's skull should cease functioning, or they detected a massive amount of damage done to the body which cannot be fixed: it will detonate. Burning the undead to little more then ash. This to keep the governments public knowledge of this innocent, and so that there is no proof of such a being ever existing. The specifics of Number 63's former life is unknown, who he was when he was alive no longer exists. There is only the numerical designation he has been given, and the A.I. in his head.

[Personality:] He's an undead, so his personality is a little limited. Basically Number 63 is very quiet and nonthreatening until the computers in his head have calculated it is time to kill. At which point, his adrenaline spikes, and 63 becomes an incredibly deadly killing machine which will not stop until he or his victims are dead.

[Equipment:]

Limb Lockers - The fitted segments of steel that are loaded with springs and locks which allow for combat to take place even with limbs or joints being snapped to pieces.

- Cover his arms and legs.
- Allow for movement even with broken bones.
- Provide a some protection for this appendages from physical attacks.
- Made from steel.

Steel Pole - A three and a half long, inch and a half steel pole that is the weapon which Number 63 will turn to in the case that it is needed. It is odd, although he is technically dead and doesn't have any real consciousness, it would seem that he even favored this weapon.

- Great for beating people to death with.
- Nice for countering weapons.

Spikes Gauntlets and Shinguards - Unlike pole and the limb lockers, these are partly made from titanium. The first layer (at the bottom) is made from steel and is where the spikes protrude from. The second layer is titanium with gaps in it to account for the spikes, this held into place by welds all along the sides of the gauntlets and shinguards.

- Spikes covered nearly the entire breadth, from tip to tip.
- Very punishing to be hit by, or to hit.
- First layer steel, second layer titanium.

Ball and Chain - These weapons serve to be both versatile and more lethal then even his pole. Each one is controlled and fired from a signal that the computers in 63's brain will emit when the time is right. The loaded springs will push forward and throw the oval balls at speeds of well over twenty-five miles an hour. This attack is to be used as a surprise weapon, and then as one to cause the opponent to be overwhelmed from Number 63's attack. Each gauntlet is capable of pulling the chains back into the gauntlets through another signal and simultaneously ready the springs once more. Each ball is made out of ten pounds of steel and spiked exactly like his gauntlets.

Features:

- Each chain is two and a half feet long.
- Each ball weighs ten pounds.
- Can be fired at twenty-five miles an hour, roughly.
- Hidden for the most part within the gauntlets, until actually being fired.
- Short chain length insures good control.

PostPosted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 1:56 pm


It has decent grammar plus much thought into the backstory. the excess of weapons seems a little god-moddish. As for personality, it would be hard Ring a purely robotic and mechanical chaarcter. It does get boring fast, so i would suggest that you add at least some personality depth.


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Smiling Jak

PostPosted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 2:17 pm


Yoder
It has decent grammar plus much thought into the backstory. the excess of weapons seems a little god-moddish. As for personality, it would be hard Ring a purely robotic and mechanical chaarcter. It does get boring fast, so i would suggest that you add at least some personality depth.


You'd be surprised. I actually enjoy playing this character, who is devoid of almost all emotion, save hate and envy. More so then characters I have who are filled with the stuff. Might I ask what you mean by an excess of weapons, and how you believe it to be god-moddish.
PostPosted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 5:16 pm


Well, to each his onw, I guess. If it suits you, go right on ahead.

It, at face value, just seems like your enemy wouldn't be able to get an attack in edge-wise. It's more of an opinionated thing with me.


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