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PostPosted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 9:34 am


Blue Heart

the surf crashes at my ankles.
I stare at the silver moon
reflected in the ocean before me.
The jewel-like stars
are like those of my heart.
The seemingly endless ocean
encaptures my heart
in its silver waves.
Spirits that dance and leap
from wave to wave
in a timeless waltz.
The mysteries... endless.
The sheer beauty, infinite.
So harsh, yet so serene.
A wild and untamable spirit.
Forever roaming,
never ceasing.
And all at once,
it seems too calm,
too innocent,
to be real.
To harness the ocean,
is to do the impossible.
PostPosted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 9:33 pm


I like this one for the simplexes and the refreshing allure of positive attributes you've placed in each line. I felt calm while reading this. Very nice.

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