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 Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 11:59 am
Ima gonna post some of meh poetry here so be sure to check it out.
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Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 12:06 pm
In a world where one is alone
With wind that chills to the bone,
One man bravely states
That he is not alone as of late,
He has found that girl that brings him joy,
and maybe even a little boy
Soon this will fall apart at the seams,
but untill then let him dream.
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Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 12:22 pm
WOOt i just thought that up ^^
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Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 12:25 pm
Really? That is awesome! You should enter it in the poetry contest *grins* I was attempting to host one...but no one is entering...
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Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 12:26 pm
I like poetry its easy......^^ XD maybe i will enter a contest....... waht do i win lol
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Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 12:43 pm
There is a place where the animals stay
a place to frolick a play,
one day this peace will shatter
and all you will hear is pitter patter,
When all the animals run away
there is one who will stand and say,
I have had enough!
No life should be this tough
And he shall be a hero,
Though everyone thought he was a zero
And around will come another day,
when the animals frolick and play.
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Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 1:07 pm
PITY
The fight was over before it begun
One man had a sword the other a gun,
The bullet was faster
It injected its plaster
And the mans leg turned to stone,
straight down to the bone
But the man with the gun couldn't stay
And let the swordsman live for another day
His last words were "how"
And all that we heard was Pow!
The man with the sword had a gun
The last thing heard was " That was fun."
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Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 1:23 pm
Aww come on some replys or criticism would be nice......
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Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 2:04 pm
They are aweome! I've told you that already XD
I'm so glad someone else knows how to write poetry. Now go enter the contest...it's in the contest area XD If you win, you get 1k
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Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 8:22 pm
The Taggerung PITY The fight was over before it begun One man had a sword the other a gun, The bullet was faster It injected its plaster And the mans leg turned to stone, straight down to the bone But the man with the gun couldn't stay And let the swordsman live for another day His last words were "how" And all that we heard was Pow! The man with the sword had a gun The last thing he said was " That was fun." Maybe change the last line to The last thing hear was "That was fun." The other I think is to long. Other than that GREAT!!!
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Nathien Bloodguard Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 8:24 pm
Thank you very much i try
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Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 5:16 pm
Claw and fang about to clash
It all will be over in a flash
Angels cannot intervein
Humans are caught in the seams
Hatered runs through their veins
One of them will die in vain
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