This is a place where you can show your inner side where you can show everyone that you are a great poet. First rule is that you need to start with " As the souls of the living slowly faid the strength of the darkness becomes alive". Second, If not wanting to use that then you need to make a poem that is atleast one page long! Now start!
Posted: Mon Jan 22, 2007 7:19 pm
HAILEY When you left me it felt like thousands of knifes each one piercing a part of my body and me still trying to reach to you and when you stood in front of me it was like me going 2 heaven and back and I couldn’t stop thinking about how bright and beautiful the light was that was reflecting from you. After I saw you it made me think how my life was and what it is now and when I see you your Eyes they show me an endless pool of love and caring. When I see you it makes me feel like I am living a whole new life with the best thing ever a wonderful, sweet and beautiful girl. If I had one wish it would only to be with you cause not even the fame or fortune would make me as happy as being with you and being together again. I feel like there is a purpose in this life when I’m with you and it makes me feel like I would live forever with you by my side, and you make me feel like nothing could go wrong, and when I’m with you I don’t think anything could hurt me with your love and strength running through my veins. So Hailey when you see this maybe you will understand how much I like you still!
LOVE, NATE
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Posted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 5:31 pm
My heart is dead and so are you I fell no pain without your love When you left me you made me numb Now i sit here all alone Now all i have left to do is to think more violint thoughs of you it pains my heart you left me this way When iall I wanted was for you to say that you loved me too But all you did was laugh when i told you what you trully meant to me and that just hurt me in a way that made me the way i am today sitting here alone with nothing left to do but cry I have many things here in front of me But all i really want is to have your love I hate waking up when your in my dreams because to me thats how things should be Yet when you in my mind i can't help but have a tear drop from my eye my life is filled with horror and pain without you by my side maybe when you see the blood drop from my arm you'll see it was never a lie i couldn't believe you could do this to me but you hurt me so much i can't even breath it hurts so bad i don't even know how i still cling to a life thats not worth living thinkin of you makes my heart really bleed what confuses me most is that even after all this is that i would still die just for your simple little kiss
Posted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 5:32 pm
feedback is welcomed just pm me though
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Posted: Fri Apr 13, 2007 3:03 pm
.:i'll alwayz be beside you:. .:until the very end:. .:wiping all your tearz away:. .:being your best friend:. .:ill smile when you smile:. .:and feel all the pain you do:. .:and if you cry a single tear:. .:i promise i'll cry too:.