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 Posted: Mon Jan 22, 2007 5:50 pm
This is my first Naruto-based fanfic. I haven't seen many NaruGaa stories, so I felt inclined to write one. I've only written a few chapters, but there will be more, not to worry.
Title: "Some Vacation"
Author: xdonttrytolovemex
Pairing: NaruGaa
Rating: PG-13 until chapter 5.
Warning: This takes place after episode 80, and Chapter 138, so if you haven't seen it, or know what happens after that, you might not want to read it. You'll probably be a little confused. lol.
Chapters: Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Four
Chapter Five [go to my dA gallery, because it's too mature to directly link on this site. Sorry for the inconvenience, people!]
Chapter Six [same as Chp. 5]
Chapter Seven [same as Chp. 6]
Chapter Eight [same as Chp. 7]
I would love to hear some feedback. Do you like it? Hate it? Are there any typos I should know about? Should I continue with it? Constructive criticism is welcomed, as long as you don't cuss me out and say how bad it sucked. Tell me how to make it better if you think that.
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Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 7:45 am
Awww, Its so cute, so cute!!! please write further, Pleeeaaasee *bows*
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Posted: Wed Jan 24, 2007 8:26 pm
Gave.Verendal Awww, Its so cute, so cute!!! please write further, Pleeeaaasee *bows*
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Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2007 8:49 pm
Yes yes We would like to read it. ITS SO CUTE! OMG THE GAARA INOSCENCE!! IS SO CUTE!!
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Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2007 9:58 pm
OMG CUTTE! update please!
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Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 3:09 am
cuuuuute ^___^ how many chapters are you planning on?
and how is it writing about gaara? i always admired those who has enough courage to write about him. I find it too difficult xP just because hes too complicated ^_^;;
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Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 9:11 pm
Nahariet cuuuuute ^___^ how many chapters are you planning on? and how is it writing about gaara? i always admired those who has enough courage to write about him. I find it too difficult xP just because hes too complicated ^_^;;
And it's actually not that difficult only because I have my own novel that I'm writing and the story is so messed up that the drama of Gaara is nothing compared to it. For me, personally, it's all about putting yourself in the mind-set of the character you're writing about. It's actually really funny because while I'm writing, I'll say something outloud that the character would be saying, just to get a feel for it and to see if it sounds like something that would really make sense. lmao. I think I might be making Gaara too naive, but when I think about it, he really doesn't know anything about love and the things tied in with it because...well, you know his no-love past. If I were in his shoes, I'd be clueless, too.
...I'm not quite sure if that answered your question or not... sweatdrop I hope so.
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 5:50 am
it was much more than i expected XD and true, he doesnt know anything about love, but after his fight with naruto he might want to try how does it taste xD after all he really want to be loved xP
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 2:57 pm
I posted Chapter Five on deviantart, but unfortunately I can't directly link you to the chapter due to the rating content. You can always just go to my dA account and click on chapter five, so no need to fret. ^_^
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 6:24 pm
O_____________________O -love-
I stopped doing homeowork for this xD "Gasp she updated! -ignores homework to go read-"
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 7:06 pm
You know, for some reason it makes me want to laugh maniacally knowing that I am keeping people from school work. lmao.
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Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 7:58 am
you`re soooooooooo evil xDD
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Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 1:29 pm
I Loved the 5th chapter,*Whipes off the nosebleed* Please write further xd
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Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 1:40 pm
Of course, of course! I'm in a really good mood today, so if all goes well, I might have the next chapter up by tonight or tomorrow. 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 8:25 pm
xdonttrytolovemex You know, for some reason it makes me want to laugh maniacally knowing that I am keeping people from school work. lmao. Laugh, laugh as maniacly as you can (just don't choke...I think I'd scream if I never found out what happened after XD!!!)
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