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 Posted: Mon Jan 22, 2007 10:42 am
Theres quite a bit I'll post if thats fine.
I bleed for you
My life is in your hands
I cry for you
My tears are on your cheeks
I lie for you
The words I always say
Have i done somethign wrong
To make you go away
It hurts me to see you go
no matter how i try
I cant seem to walk away
from my lovesick lullaby
Some things go away when they're ignored
but thats not the way it works
when you pull the strings
I'm the main puppet
Doing everything you say
Would i still breath,
if you you didnt think it was okay?
Would my heart still beat
If you did give a nod?
In a place where you control
The life of someone else
you take so lightly
that i bleed for you
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Posted: Mon Jan 22, 2007 10:49 am
Sleep ebing at the edges of my mind
in dreams, glorious insanity you will find
I leave my eyes wide shut
Sightlessly Seeing the horrors in the dark
Colors blending
First red
then green
then blue
the white
I open my eyes and stare into the night
The darkness blinds my unseeing eyes
Slowly sleep takes me
Im trapped within the night
In my dreams i hear your lies
Morning comes
I close my eyes
Missing the dark
That gave way to light
You break my heart
Again and again
No matter what I do
It seems I cannot win
No matter how I try
She’s better still
You say you love me
But I know the drill
You’re afraid of loosing one of us
But what you cannot see
Is that while you hold tight to her
You’re quickly losing me
I know that you are torn
Between her and I
But the one thing I can’t comprehend
Is do you really cry?
Cry for confusion
Cry for pain
Or cry for reasons you cant explain
Why is it that she is saved
From all this endless pain?
I know you don’t want her to hurt
And for what its worth
Neither do I
Why should there be three to cry?
So let her be happy
There with you.
Blissfully unaware
Of the danger in her midst
But losing you,
Now isn’t a risk.
I love you
But I cant wait forever
On something that wont come
You can now rest easy
Your splitting path
Is now down to one.
Tears of blood
Stain my cheeks
The brightly colored rainbow
Chases away the pain
The pills they put me on
Again
And again
Nothing sacred
In this place
I’m just a name with out a face
It’s like a battlefield
What little is gained
All is lost
Lost within the soul
Scars with in,
Hidden behind
Behind these eyes,
All I do is cry
Tears of blood
That stain my cheeks
I'm killing myself slowly
Crimson flows thick and warm
I lay here waiting for my veins to run dry
You just laugh as I slowly die
The pain you caused is no longer here
For I am gone, I shed not one tear,
But a never ending sea
In this life we sicken me
What we had was beautiful
How could that go to waste?
How can you tell me you hate me with such haste...?
As I lay here blood dripping from my wrist
I think of our love and how it took a fatal twist.
And the rest are too emo to mention...Yea..think about that one.
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Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 3:16 pm
::sniffles:: no body wants to read my poems
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Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 4:46 pm
I got caught up in that poem. It's really long... The rhythm seems more like rap lyrics rather than a poem... The tempo shifted around a bit and I believe you were in a rush, as you have many typos. Keep the flow going. I think you've cut it off at some weird places. Otherwise, I enjoyed your poetry. biggrin
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Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 10:19 pm
I bleed for you ::sniffles:: no body wants to read my poems don't worry, mine either.
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Posted: Thu Jan 25, 2007 2:05 pm
Lord_Skyy I got caught up in that poem. It's really long... The rhythm seems more like rap lyrics rather than a poem... The tempo shifted around a bit and I believe you were in a rush, as you have many typos. Keep the flow going. I think you've cut it off at some weird places. Otherwise, I enjoyed your poetry. biggrin the large spaces indicated differnt poems >.<
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