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 Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 12:14 pm
" Swallowed by Sin"  Envy, Lust, and Pride
Swallowed me whole
engulf my soul with sin
I am losing you to hate
I am losing myself in mistakes
blinded by my faults
perfection is before me
yet unreachable from where I am
Envy, Lust and Pride
swallowed me wholeI went though an unnoticible artist block this week. For about the 5th time and 6 months the guy that is driving me crazy said he was over me again. Maybe it's for real this time, but to tell the truth I hope not. We both seem to have those short moments where we think we are over eachother then we seem to find ourselfs telling each other that we still have stong feelings for one another. He thinks I'm trying to get with his best friend, he's too stupid to relize that I'm not. :********: I'm not sure what you can critique on this, it's a sketch so please don't say "The Lines are sloppy" or you'll make yourself look dumb (sorry to put it that way) Maybe if you can find something on the girls anatomy or something that stick out. "Two-Faced"Used: Millennium Ink Pins Shading Pencils Photo Elements 3 (I'm not sure if that's ok or not in here, I just bleneded in the shading to make it smoother...) To tackel another problem in my social life I have a "Friend" who is two-faced. She is nice and goodie goodie around me but when I turn my back she talks about me and I have caught her doing it more then once. I want to belive that she will change but she has one of the ugliest souls I have ever seen in one person, and this is how I see her.
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Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 2:10 pm
there are a lot of things i like about this. i'm not going to say that the lines are sloppy, because i think they look good that way. but i will say that im kind of confused about what's going on in the middle of the picture; it looks kind of like you half-drew something else and just left it there (im speaking of the lines which radiate from the center of the girl's torso), but then again, you may have intended that (if so, it's pretty cool).
hm...proportions. i think the proportions look pretty good for the most part. the only thing i'm unsure about is the width of the thighs; the shin/knee is a little bulky, but the thighs look kind of skinny in comparison. but it's kind of hard to see. hm...one thing that i might suggest is having darker shadows in the faces behind the girl to draw the eye out; the shadows on the girl are nice and dark, but the faces seem light in comparison.
conceptually, i really like this. it's a wonderful portrayal of the poem. did you write the poem?
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Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 3:03 pm
kirio26 there are a lot of things i like about this. i'm not going to say that the lines are sloppy, because i think they look good that way. but i will say that im kind of confused about what's going on in the middle of the picture; it looks kind of like you half-drew something else and just left it there (im speaking of the lines which radiate from the center of the girl's torso), but then again, you may have intended that (if so, it's pretty cool). I wanted to make that part of the monsters having them wrap themselves around her, kinda giving them the idea of "swallowing" her if you would say. Kirio26 hm...proportions. i think the proportions look pretty good for the most part. the only thing i'm unsure about is the width of the thighs; the shin/knee is a little bulky, but the thighs look kind of skinny in comparison. but it's kind of hard to see. hm...one thing that i might suggest is having darker shadows in the faces behind the girl to draw the eye out; the shadows on the girl are nice and dark, but the faces seem light in comparison. conceptually, i really like this. it's a wonderful portrayal of the poem. did you write the poem? I think the shin/knee thing are showing off my bad forshortening skills XP Thanks for the tip, I'll do that with the shadows, and yes I did write the poem, I'm glad you like it.
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Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 3:55 pm
" Snafu-Art Forum" Fan art for snafu-comics.com <3 " Blind Love" Two different worlds, two different races, both born blind. Fall unto each other's heart, love that if forbidden. An unborn seen as a monster..Both the girl and boy are blind and the girl is pregnant. gungirl.deviantart.com
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Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 12:07 pm
i see some good improvments in your work from the first ones that you posted in this guild, yet it can still tell it's your work. that's great.
as for the one you just posted, i'm not sure if the dark outline is working out with the light pencil shading. but the over all composition is great.
keep up the good work 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 3:29 pm
i agree with cap'n; i can definately see the improvements.
also, good job on working in all those characters in one picture (i've tried that and it's harder than it sounds)
as for "blind love" i like the concept, a lot. however, i find myself unable to find fault anywhere in it. this could be because i'm having a little trouble seeing what's going on because the sketch is still so rough. the transparency is kinda trippin me out. from what i can tell, though, it's coming together quite nicely. i especially like the hair on both characters. post when finished/further along!
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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 9:57 pm
I'm sorry, my sketchy style is so rough and messy it's hard to read all the time here is the inked version of it: and if you wish to see the CG version of it look hereDon't want to post it you know, there are some more realistic drawings that i would love to post here though... Just need to scan them " Dead Art" This is some fan art for a friend on a diffrent sight, not sure why it scanned lines, that's the first time it's ever done that... " Rising Sun" A frind of mine has been looking at my art lately and he asked me to try and draw a tatoo for him. This is just the concept of it. The bg will be the Japanese Flag with the sun, I'm thinking about makeing it a inverse image, with the dragon's outline being white and the sun and rays being black. Or maybe have the sun and rays be black and white and then the dragon having a white type of glow outline and then just be the original inking (when I do ink it) Wich one do you suggest? " Hit That" I know you want to hit that, but no baby's daddy get's thatSo I was listening to an Offspring song, "Hit That" and I got to thinking ' What if guys got pregnate I doubt he'd get laid if the girls knew he was a baby's daddy' Then I thought of this and it made me laugh! gungirl.deviantart.comA few of my older threads have poped up here and now I have a newer one, is it ok to have this many threads at the top?
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Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2007 3:34 pm
ah, "blind love" is much clearer now 3nodding i really like it. i'm having a hard time envisioning what you plan to do with "rising sun." by sun with rays, do you mean the japanese empire flag? like this one or do you mean you want the normal japanese flag (just the red circle, which i know represents the sun) with rays? if you mean the "empire" flag, then i'd say the inverse image thing sounds cool.
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Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2007 5:20 pm
in the flicker. ah, "blind love" is much clearer now 3nodding i really like it. i'm having a hard time envisioning what you plan to do with "rising sun." by sun with rays, do you mean the japanese empire flag? like this one or do you mean you want the normal japanese flag (just the red circle, which i know represents the sun) with rays? if you mean the "empire" flag, then i'd say the inverse image thing sounds cool. The Empire Flag, I'm going to get the ok with him tomorrow so I'll proabably have it inked and maybe the bg in it.
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Posted: Sun Apr 29, 2007 9:35 am
gungirl.deviantart.com" Lax" So yeah I need A LOT of work on my blending and my scanner did not help at all. I really like this, I don't really care that there is nudity if I need to put a link bc of immature ppl then I will. Original Photo: Herewell last night I was so upset, bc the one guy that I thought really cared about me doesn't want to be w/me because he has sexuall thoughts about me. And because of this the hate for my body has grown. I know it sounds dumb but it's really hard for me to find a guy that really cares about me because my body is always the factor of my distruction. But when I saw this photo I just kinda thought and reminded myself that I just need to relax... I have a few other I want to post but I don't have time right now...
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Posted: Sat May 26, 2007 7:43 am
I've just been really tired lately, maybe because of all the late nights with someone but who knows smile I just kinda feel like I need to relax a little. And when I saw this photo I just had to draw it. I think I'm getting better with my blending though once again my scanner isn't helping... Original Photo HereAny hints, tips or tricks on how I can make my blending better would be awesome! Thank you for any comments or critiques...
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Posted: Sat May 26, 2007 11:16 am
That's a really nice drawing 3nodding what medium did you use? I love the creases in the material 3nodding
I think the only tip I can give is that, to make the top of her arm and the jacket have a little more depth and not look so flat, is to maybe curve your strokes as you shade, just a little.
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Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 7:51 pm
Shadow__Dweller That's a really nice drawing 3nodding what medium did you use? I love the creases in the material 3nodding I think the only tip I can give is that, to make the top of her arm and the jacket have a little more depth and not look so flat, is to maybe curve your strokes as you shade, just a little. ok thank you, and I use graphite 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 12:53 pm
Ah, dang. xd Nicely done. I couldn't see the original photo, but it looks like you did pretty well. biggrin Yay for graphite users!
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