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Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 8:08 am
The first three poems are actually pretty old ( I believe I wrote those when I was still in middle school, seventh or eighth grade) while the last one was actually written just recently. Comments are welcome!
*Note: all of the following poems are copyright to GodessKiki so please ask for permission before using them for whatever purposes necessary*
1) Memories
Nights spent laughing and crying Playing and fighting Running through the woods Chasing fireflies
Nights spent sitting under the sun Sleeping under the moon Laughing at the clouds Wishing on the stars
Memories never forgotten Hearts never returned.
2) Jokes under the rain
They tease and laugh Thinking it’s all a game When they’re actually pushing me to the edge
I’m about to go overboard And sink into the dark depths Of depression and my thoughts Of blissful death
I can’t feel anything anymore My decision is made Tonight at eight I’ll end this horrible game
I walk alone Soaked from the rain When it suddenly stops And I look up Into the face of a smiling girl Holding an umbrella overhead
“You’re wet.” She says As if that explains Her kind act
She smiles at me And I try to smile back And I walk in silence As she talks to me About everything And anything She’s so carefree
She tells me this joke And I find myself laughing A sound so foreign to me Yet strangely relaxing
And as we stop in front of a large house I tell her it’s my stop, the end And she smiles a secret smile And shakes her light blond head And says “No, it’s only the beginning Of something great.” And then she turns and walks away
And as I stand in the bathroom Looking in the mirror A knife at my throat The girl comes to my head And I’m smiling again
I put down the knife Lay down to rest And wonder if tomorrow I’ll get to hear her funny jokes once again
3) The things
Sometimes I dream Of wondrous things Of bright, shining angels Smiling at me
Of music Taking a form And dancing with me All through the storm
Of laughter And children Friends growing old
Of fairytale princesses Falling in love
Angels Music Friends Love
These are the things Deep in my heart
The things that I dream of Deep in my sleep
These are the dreams Deep in my heart
4) The jagged edges of pain
Like black, stormy waves They surge and recede Crashing against The jaggedy shore Of one lonely beach
Trashing against And wearing away The once smooth stones Who now are deformed
The wind howls it's pity It's sorrow, lament For these poor individuals Consumed by the waves
Yet no one but these two; The wind that howls pity The cruel, trashing waves Will ever note a difference In the once smooth stones Who now are deformed And will never be Smooth once again
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Posted: Mon Jan 22, 2007 2:55 am
They're all fairly decent poems, but I, personally, only enjoyed reading 'Jokes Under the Rain'. The others seemed a bit, how should I put it... Bland...
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Posted: Mon Jan 22, 2007 5:36 pm
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