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 Posted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 2:38 pm
The heartless angel died two days ago
Tossed from Heaven into the world below.
Now she walks alongside a human mass
Working hard to support his own broke a**.
She wonders where her compassion will go
As she steps off her stoop and into the snow
Once again becoming part of that mass--
Except, she claims that she has much more class.
It doesn't matter-her words ring untrue...
...Even humans go through what angels do.
I know it's not great, I wrote it in 5 mins, but I would appreciate some comments on it. smile Thank you.
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Posted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 6:58 pm
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Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 10:59 am
Quote: Now she walks alongside a human mass Working hard to support his own broke a**.
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 5:28 pm
The poem is very nice althought some of the words are a little unexpected. It's still very nice
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