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PostPosted: Thu Jan 18, 2007 2:59 pm


Welcome!

Welcome to my little Lab[305] concept and quest thread. You've stumbled upon my little place to dump the Fel Essences and souls that bang around in my head. I'm also currently questing for a little specific raevan of my own.Feel free to post and comment on and/or critisize my ideas!!
PostPosted: Thu Jan 18, 2007 3:01 pm


Table Of Contents

1. Welcome
2. Table of contents
3. Thanks
4. Guide to Ideas
5. Character?
6. Ideas Directory
7. Reserved
8. Reserved

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 18, 2007 3:03 pm


Thank you!


Thanks to all the wonderful people at Lab[305], especially Kyouporuchi, the creator of it all.


Thanks to those who encouraged me to make this thread.^^
PostPosted: Thu Jan 18, 2007 3:04 pm


Guide to Ideas


Post
Fel Essence/Soul name here FE or S indicating wheter the post refers to a Fel Essence or Soul

discription of Fel Essenc/ Soul is in italics underneath the name...

Possible Souls/Fel Essences:
Soul/ Fel Essence #1: reason for soul/ fel essence #1
Soul/ Fel Essence #2: reason for soul/ fel essence #2
Soul / Fel Essence #3: reason for soul/ fel essence #3
etc...

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 18, 2007 3:07 pm


My Character

(Work in progress. Color Picture coming soon!)

User ImageFull Name: Xavier Alexander Black Jr.
Nickname: Sam (Call him by his real name and die!)
Race: Human-Great Barracuda crossbreed
Actual Age: 19
Outward Age:13-15
Eye Color: Light blue
Skin Color: His skin color is a regualr light pink but since his blood is blue places that are normally red or darker pink (like lips, cheeks and fingertips) are blue.
Hair: Naturally a pale blond but he dyes it bright red.


Overall Appearence: From a distance, Sam can be easily mistaken for a normal human, albeit maybe wearing blue lipstick since his lips are very blue. Upon closer inspection, his fish related traits are more visable. His hands are webbed, appearing as if the fingers are almost flipper like, and he makes no attempt to hide them. The webbing does not hinder him any, except in tasks that requite fingers to go through things, like using a scissors. Also, protruding from either side of his jaw, slightly furhter forward and down from his ears, he has a pair of spiney silver and blue fins. His ears themselves are pointed and long almost like an elf's ears, although he doesn't have a speck of elven blood in him. His final fishy trait is a pair of pointed teeth that poke out past his lips from his bottom jaw. His remaining teeth are also pointed and quite sharp but are small enough not to be seen when he closes his mouth. Sam makes no attempt to hide any of his non-human traits. He has three piercings in either ear (and they always have arings of some sort in them) and he wears clothing that probably would be described as either punk or rock star-ish, usually in dark colors. He has a set amount of clothes but he'll mix up his clothes to make different outfits. He is always wearing some kind of wide wrist band or bracelet on his left wrist, and is never without his necklace, although he often hides it by tucking it away. Since he isn't held together completly on his own and has some spells perminatky cast on him, those whoo can sense/ see magic notice its presence sround him at all times.


Likes: Water, motorcycles, going fast, fish, being free, the colors silver and blue
Dislikes: Scientists (look out Kyou!), cats, sea food, being bored, being called small, little, Fishy, or by his full name.


Personality: Most people would probably characterise Sam as a fiesty teenage boy who like sot take risks, has a temper that's a little too quick, a bit antiscocial, and very rude. All those things are true, but there are otehr aspects to his personality besides those on the surface. Despite the fact that Sam is extremely gullible and sometimes has trouble comprehending what other people are thinking or feeling, he actually has a talent for philosophy and science. He actually developed his own religion based on his own struggles with his identity, which he is extremely devoted to. Sam however, doesn't let his more deep and sensitive side show that much so to most people he is just a rambunctious teenager with a bad attitude and a motorcycle.


Job: Janitor at Durem University
History: Sam was the product of a expiriment to mix human genes with a completely different animal. He was the eleventh expiriment attempt and the only one to survive to a independant stage where he didn't need to be hooked up to lab equipment to survive, although he had a couple spells cast on him to keep his body from killing itself. He was named after the scientist who created him and donated the human DNA for the project, Dr. Xavier Black. Sam's childhood was full of expiriments on him, some of which were very painful. Dr. Black kept up the appearence of a caring father figure for the media and other scientists but when alone with Sam would simply treat him like another expiriment. Sam hated it and conspired to run away ever since he was little. When he was ten he got a chance, and he took it, runnign away from his scientist/ spellcaster father. He has since spent his time learnign how to actually liv eon his own in regular scociety. He also spent quite a lot of time trying to get into highscool, and then promplty dropping out. He went through an identy crisis after his attempt at highschool which is when he discovered his own religion. Although it isn't related to any actual religion it appears to be somewhat true as some of the rights Sam "discovered" actually to influnce things or have magical effects. Whether he mistakingly discovered magic or religion he doens't know or care. The past year he found his job at Durem university and has been spending the money he earns there to pay off the ramshakle wooden house with a forest he bought. He calls the house "Deathwish" to get the idea of how mony repairs it needs done on it before it would be considered remotely safe.


Family: Dr. Xavier Alexander Black, Status- Disowned as a father or anyone pleasent from Sam's point of view.


Extra: He has no bellybutton 'cause he's a test tube baby!! Oh, and he's steril.
PostPosted: Thu Jan 18, 2007 3:10 pm


Ideas Directory

These will open the idea in a new window. You don't really need this unless you wish to view the ideas in seperate windows or if you're having trouble finding a specific idea, (only a threat if this goes over one page or people actually post.)

Crystal Mercury (Fel Essence)
She-Wolf (Soul)
Rotated Pyramid(Fel Essence)
Venus Flytrap (Soul)
Half Moon (Soul)
Gray Hole (Fel Essence)
Figment of Imagination (Fel Essence)

More coming soon!

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Pensword

PostPosted: Thu Jan 18, 2007 3:13 pm


My Quest Raevan


Name: Caerwyn
Guardian: Sam
Gender: Male
Fel Essence: Unlukcy rabbit's foot
Soul: Peach (Tree?)
Hair color: Brown roots that fade to white. The white parts have a pinkish-peachish tint to them.
Hair style: He has long very spikey bangs with both white and brown strands. His back hair is cut short and kindof spikey. Two long locks of hair hang down in front of his ears.
Eye color: Brown or black
Skin color: Pale skin with pink/peach highlights
Markings on skin: A brown spot over each eye.
Clothing style: Nothing specific. I just want many peach shapes and fuzzy bits incorperated
Wings: Little fuzzy tips, peach shaped base.d 'Feathers" are acually leaves
Horns: Two rabbit ear like leaves stick out of the top of his head.
Ears: Short but pointed
Accesories: Lots of little fuzzy bits.
Personality: A very happy and bubbly raevan. His personality is very childlike, and he will believe anything someone says to him. He doesn't know the difference between right and wrong and finds innumerable ways to get into trouble because of it. He seems to be hyperractive all the time and dispite his speed and agility, is quite clumsy and unlucky. He loves simple thinks and doesn't like anything too complicated for him to comprehend (which will often send him into a pout.) He adores fluffy and fuzzy things and loves to touch and taste everything (licking stuff is his favorite way to do both.) He likes candy and sweet things in particular.
Alignment: Chaotic neutral

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 18, 2007 3:23 pm


Reserved

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 18, 2007 3:43 pm


Crystal Mercury FE

Mercury, one of the few metals that is liquid at room temperature. Its freezing point exceeds -37.89 degrees farenheit. This mercury however is hardened crystal... at room temperature? It's even warm to the touch! Kyo has studied it to assure himself in its pure nature and has confirmed it to be pure mercury.

Possible Souls:
Capricorn: Since the mercury is a combination of liquid and metal I thought it would be perfect to have capricaorn, a goat fish, that represents both liquid and earth. Plus, i loves the ram horns.
Stone: well since no one has done a inadamate object for their soul yet (hink) I thought this would be cool. Plus stone combinged with a metal might be pretty cool.
Smoke: Since I have water and earth covered with the Fel Essence I thought I'd get some Fire and air in the Raevan too!
Ghost: Liquid metal + incorpreal being = sounds like fun
Metal of some sort: ROBOT!!
Electricity: Ditto above!
PostPosted: Fri Jan 19, 2007 3:44 pm


She-wolf S

The legendary wolf who suckled the twins Romulus and Remus who would one day grow up to found Rome. It was also said that the gods blessed the she wolf with the ability to turn into a human for keeping the two brothers alive. Eventually this she wolf is said to have givin rise to the werewolf species.*

Possible Fel Essences:
Something to do with the moon: she gave rise to werewolfs and she's a wolf... kinda obvious...
A Essence having to do with time: seeing as she is from the ancient past and her sould would be really old I thought time would be a good match.
Feather/ air essence: I always thought wolves with feathers are pretty...
Something extremely masculine: Since the soul is a definate female it would give rise to a very confused and very interesting Raevan.
Bronze Fel Essence: Came up with this idea because the only statue to the she-wolf is made of bronze...





*I altered the myth slightly

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 12:49 pm


Rotated Pyramid FE

This stone pyramid has been rotated ninty degrees in its demensions. It looks like a cardboard cutout of a pyramid shaped stone, but is much more. The demensions it occupies have been rotated ninty degrees from the norm. While this has no effect on its hight or length, its width is no more then a line, occupying the demension of time, and its time occupies its length. It cannot be moved forwards or backwards but by moving along its length its entire timeline from birth to death can be witnessed at convience. It is strange such a stable structure sould become so unstable in its existance...


Possible Souls:
Anubis: The egyptian god who judged those proceeding to the afterlife. I thought the egyptian theme would match the pyramid and the Anibis is kind of the gate between this world and the next so he would match well with something in-between demensions.
Sand: Also going with the egyptian theme. I also felt that stone and sand were a good match.
PostPosted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 2:22 pm


(( Hello~~~ <3

I've looked over your thread and I thought I'd give some comments and critique that may hopefully help in the future! <3

I really like the Crystal Mercury the most. There have been inorganic and inanimate objects as souls (Titanium), but I'm a huge fan of ghosts.. so I'd be partial and think that it could be really cool.

Crystal Mercury has the best description of the current ones because it is definitely something that would not exist in nature at room temperature. It's not at all characterized by the element-- and that is exactly what a fel essence is!

Some helpful points for you thread to attract more attention might be a single color to make ideas pop, banners, or whatnot, but the idea is good! I hope you come up with a guardian soon! ))


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Pensword

PostPosted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 2:27 pm


((Thankies!! Crystal mercury is definately my favorite too (which is why it got first post of my ideas XD.) I think I shall work on making my posts more interesting to attract attention. Thanks for your advice.^^))
PostPosted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 10:10 pm


((Okay my character is up! Please Crit her!))

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 3:44 pm


((Bump))
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