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Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2007 10:20 pm

blegh only thing i've drawn lately that im partly satisfied with, care 2 critique it?

art classes are s**t lately i just cant seem 2 get my s**t together i have no inspiration whatsoever right now. UGHHHGDH. ever feel like this? sad

Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2007 10:47 pm

just fukn around cause im bored and school is canceled tommorow twisted

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Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2007 11:55 pm

I like it. 3nodding The body is nice. I guess the only thing that could be pointed out is the long neck.

Posted: Wed Jan 17, 2007 8:36 am

The extended arm seems too long, or maybe it's just unclear where the joint is. Generally the elbow reaches the bottom of the ribs, and the wrist is at around crotch level. If you look at the proportions, she's got an arm that looks like it'd reach to her knees at least.

The face and torso looks cool so far, though. 3nodding

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Posted: Wed Jan 17, 2007 8:42 am

Zahir

The extended arm seems too long, or maybe it's just unclear where the joint is. Generally the elbow reaches the bottom of the ribs, and the wrist is at around crotch level. If you look at the proportions, she's got an arm that looks like it'd reach to her knees at least.

The face and torso looks cool so far, though. 3nodding

hmm....i think you're right eek i'll fix it if i get off my lazy bum sweatdrop

thx lol plz!

Posted: Wed Jan 17, 2007 5:11 pm

hm......i'm going 2 throw my scanner out the window :http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/posting.php?mode=reply&tc=1&t=7457555
Gaia :: Forums - Post a Replyscream: it kept cropping the picture weirdly. like the first 10 trys only got the stomache p__p this is as complete a picture i could get sad so the elbow does exist u__u
it looks kinda wonky now that its on computer @___@ but dunno maybe its the neck????
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Posted: Wed Jan 17, 2007 7:37 pm

Necks a little long (and a tiininiyintinitnitinniny bit skinny), but it's not too much of a problem if you just want that to be part of your style. Boobies are shaped funny! Also, they should be a little higher. The are where her right arm is connected to the body looks funny, I think it's the shirt. Sorta makes it look like the right booby is placed too far in. Oh, and the right arm is sorta short, especially compared to the left arm (and especially since the right arm is theoretically closer to the foreground than the left arm is, since the body is turned.) I like your style though, it'd make some thuggin' comics. cool

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