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A gaia comission for Victioria-chan, (though, this is the version without the glasses and ninja headband). I hope I improved much from my las picture I submitted here.

The neck is too long. Arms are too skinny. The arms connecting to the body reminds me of play-doh, where are the armpits? 4laugh The shading isn't right; find one light source, and be confident in how you shade. Follow the contours of the body, not just of the lines. You can add detail to your clothes, the shirt in particular, by making folds along the sides. Not too many, just enough to give it a look. Even tight clothes might have folds in them. The sword lacks luster. Try running a small white line along the top edges of the sword. It makes it look like there's more light. It's not a big deal if you like drawing super skinny people, but just as a note, the waist should be about the size, or rather a bit bigger than the head. I like how the leggings fold at the bottom.