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Lucky Lucifer Vice Captain
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 Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2007 11:36 am
4 bars min 10 max
No feeding recycling or biting
Whoever accepts goes first.
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Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2007 12:11 pm
*Reserved for Vedic's verse*
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Posted: Thu Jan 18, 2007 6:53 pm
i accept.....
check this...
ill let the beat commense
so i can lead the crowd in sweet suspense
your rhymes are past progressive
while mine are in the perfect tense
now sit back and take offense
while i tear through each pretense
no puches spared while you on defense
i hope your prepared to ride the bench
as you sit and stare while your teeth are clenched
my rhymes like the god they are complex
you and i are opposite like concave and convex
i cant help but laugh at your context
you focus on text , please wheres your intellect
with a style like that you aint clamin no checks
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Posted: Fri Jan 19, 2007 1:07 am
[-D.O.C-] i accept..... check this... ill let the beat commense so i can lead the crowd in sweet suspense your rhymes are past progressive while mine are in the perfect tense now sit back and take offense while i tear through each pretense no puches spared while you on defense i hope your prepared to ride the bench as you sit and stare while your teeth are clenched my rhymes like the god they are complex you and i are opposite like concave and convex i cant help but laugh at your context you focus on text , please wheres your intellect with a style like that you aint clamin no checks
This Dame of Cockbiters needs to step back 'fore he gets shamed//
You seen the Last Samurai, right? Well if it's news to you/
You should throw yourself on your own flame sword like their losers do//
By the time I'm done with you, you'd be like improverished youth-in-Asia/
Spendin' time in ICU, beggin' for Euthanasia//
Learn to read all posts in the thread, especially when I reserved/
Or I'll hit you so hard, with formaldehyde your body can't be preserved//
Now I'll reverse direction and face Lucifer like I intended/
And leave you both like journal articles - fully indented//
The full extent of my lyricism's strictly inhibited/
and dumbed down for your reading pleasure like museum exhibits//
See. I'm Iron Man to your clan, you have to deal with the metal/
You couldn't beat me in this battle without a deal with the devil//
Put your soul on the line for the seven-year-itch/
But really, enlisting for unearned skill makes you a seven-year-b***h
And I don't need the full ten bars to dedicate the battle to you/
'Cause four bars short still makes you dead cattle, dude.
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Lucky Lucifer Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Jan 19, 2007 12:15 pm
I didn't even spit and your already green with envy
Just an easy target, seriously don't tempt me
It's clear you threats are emtpy when you spend half your verse
Tryna avoid the battle you made so clear you reserved
It's absured you need to focus, or like locus I'll swarm
Make you crawl back in the womb wishing you never were born
Dance with the devil, or flirt with lady luck
Option doesn't matter, either one will leave you ******** up
Verbal warfare, this is your chance to advance
Stood waving 3 white flags*, where you living son? France!?
Already half cooked** have you served like orderves
Then ignore all your whole verse like in microsoft, word***
cool
Just so theres no confusion...
*The 3 white flags are the wing things Vedics wearing
**Half cooked refers to half of him being on fire
*** His whole verse is in green and in microsoft word you can right click and select ignore all which wipes all the green away.
=D
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Posted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 3:11 am
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Lucky Lucifer Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 1:29 pm
Vedic once again committed some more of that lyrical murder
Vote: Vedic
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Posted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 1:39 pm
Yung_Vicious Vedic once again committed some more of that lyrical murder Vote: Vedic His style is consistant. Vote: Vedic
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Posted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 1:41 pm
I was kinda hooked on his verse after his first bar sweatdrop
Vote: LL
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Posted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 1:51 pm
Damn I thought both were equal but Vedic's lyrical content was just a little more complex so I go to give it to Vedic.
VOTE: Vedic
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