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 Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2007 11:17 am
if i was to walk in the rain,
will you see me cry?
if i was to go into a pool,
will you see me die?
if i never felt love or sorrow...
does that make my heart black and hollow
this was a poem i made after i broke up with my boyfriend plz tell me what you think and if you want to you can leave your poems to ok
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Posted: Thu Jan 18, 2007 7:49 pm
hey very nice poem but ashame that ur b/f left you to go away back into the shadown or the darkness but not into the light beside i hate the light. i enjoy staying in the shadows lol.
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