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 Posted: Sun Jan 14, 2007 12:44 am
These tears I cry
As I watch standing near by
Why does this occur?
Why was my life with you a blur?
How come it has to be this way?-Kaatara
My hurts deep inside
A heavy burden grows
From a sorrow I only know-Katara
How can I tell you
All the things my hearts'been telling me
Can you see?
There is just no me.-Zuko
The loss I have felt
All the pain
Yet there was no gain
As I watch you stand
Covering your face with the back of your hand
Your Tears flow
Only I know-Zuko
Suffering and Pain
I hope you won't suffer again
All the things I've reached hoping for
Has persished in my Fathers'War-Zuko
All but you
These feelings I never knew
With my last breath
I have realized
The only one who mattered,had been you
Time has gone so I will too
Remember me when I die-zuko
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Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 1:48 pm
Wow, very nice. Could use a bit of grammatical editing... but it's good.
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Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 7:01 pm
Yeah Zuko experess his feeling for her as he lays dying in her arms.
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Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2007 3:06 pm
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Princess Tessa of Sailand
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Posted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 5:43 pm
Tears. cry I think it was your most recent post, Jakan, that cleared it all up. Unfortunately, I don't think the little stanzas express that she's dying. Perhaps describe a wound that she's suffering from? Ragged breath, eyes like slits, etc. Oh. Gosh. Now I have to go write my own. I won't post it though, so you'll have originality. biggrin
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