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 Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 7:32 pm
I will post a few of my poems here. Feel free to critique them.
My Questions Go to the Stars
Is life worth living?
Is breath worth breathing?
Can I live without living,
and breath without breathing?
My questions go to the stars...
If life is not wanted,
will it eventually go away?
If a breath is stolen,
can it ever be earned back?
My questions go to the stars...
If time stands still,
can it also run?
If life can be put on pause,
can it also rewind?
My questions go to the stars...
Whatever happened to
"friendship like love lasts forever"?
If that were true,
what happened to you?
My questions go to the stars...
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Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2007 4:51 pm
My Father, or Lack Thereof
you walk through that door
like you've never been here before
you call me your daughter
i see no hell hotter
like the fiery death upon you feet
you never look back through the heat
it hits me hard like a brick
as i realize time ticks
one day down, two more years
distracted by incompetent fears
you see me trip, watch me fall
you never really cared, thats all
shes carrying your new favorite
go ahead, do it, take the kit
its a baby girl, oh-no
you never noticed, here i go
goodbye father, goodbye dad
since your now blind, its sad
i must go, i must not despair
but why not, you don't care
you said i would always be your baby girl...
you lied
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Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2007 8:50 pm
A Sliver of Truth
Writing poems about dying
Singing songs about crying
Breathing in, breathing out
I'm still alive, without a doubt
Silent screams of pain
Day to day the same
A single piercing scream
Wake up! It's just a dream
Wander around this room
Fall asleep, in the tomb
There they are, tortured souls
Could never accomplish their goals
Find, escape... Oh look! a vent
For their sins, repent
A single door, simple barrier
The other side said is merrier
Turn the handle, cool summer breeze
SLAM! LOCK! Keeper of keys
Lightning flash, thunder roll
The pounding rain, midnight foal
Blood shed upon the land
On the beach, in the sand
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Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2007 8:58 pm
Happiness
Happiness is overrated
Too many times I've hated
The way that things have to be
Just makes no sense to me
I can't imagine why
Through everything that hides
Happiness is among the things
That make up all these strings
It messes with my way of life
And makes of me, a sacrifice
If only, if only, the children chant
Its not all I scream in rant
Happiness is not what it seems
Though you can't tell through cheerful screams
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