I will post a few of my poems here. Feel free to critique them.
My Questions Go to the Stars
Is life worth living?
Is breath worth breathing?
Can I live without living,
and breath without breathing?
My questions go to the stars...
If life is not wanted,
will it eventually go away?
If a breath is stolen,
can it ever be earned back?
My questions go to the stars...
If time stands still,
can it also run?
If life can be put on pause,
can it also rewind?
My questions go to the stars...
Whatever happened to
"friendship like love lasts forever"?
If that were true,
what happened to you?
My questions go to the stars...
Is life worth living?
Is breath worth breathing?
Can I live without living,
and breath without breathing?
My questions go to the stars...
If life is not wanted,
will it eventually go away?
If a breath is stolen,
can it ever be earned back?
My questions go to the stars...
If time stands still,
can it also run?
If life can be put on pause,
can it also rewind?
My questions go to the stars...
Whatever happened to
"friendship like love lasts forever"?
If that were true,
what happened to you?
My questions go to the stars...