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x_.PinkFloyd._x

PostPosted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 1:28 pm


It's dark in here
Though, very comphy
I can hear the voices outisde
She tells everyone who I am
My name is now Elizebeth
Or so she says

I kick and rotate
It hurts her sometimes
He tells her she'll be fine
During the night
I listen to them talk about me
Understanding is the problem

The doctors tell her she'll be ready soon
Her excited reaction frightens me
But I know I'll be alright
She coo's and sings
What a beautiful voice
I wonder what her name is

Pushing and kicking
Maybe I can get out
Though it wont be on my own
A pair of hands
They reach to me
What is going on?

I see the light
Bright as it can be
Cold and wet, I scream and cry
She smiles at me- I think I hurt her
Her singing to me let's me know she's fine
Because now I know, this mommy is mine

Opening my eyes, I think i'm in heaven
Her eyes, her hair, her lips and nose
Almost like an angel
I fall asleep, bundled up in her arms
Rocking me as she sings once more
Soothing as ever

What's wrong mommy?
You stopped singing to me
Peaceful as you lay there, if only I could hug you
I'm being taken away from you mommy
Did I do somthing to make him cry?
He tells me he's my daddy

Daddy cries, his tears hit my blanket
"She's gone, she's gone. Why didn't she make it?"
I see my mommy, so lifeless, so sad
He cant take it, my daddy is mad
My angel of a mommy is now gone, it's only half-passed eleven
I love you mommy, please sing for me in heaven
PostPosted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 7:18 pm


I like the poem. I think it was really, truly beautiful.

Malicoy

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