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This is a simple haiku I wrote in art class yesterday.

Deep in the desert
The red dragon breathes, softly
Softly in it's peace

I concur. Write more, my dear.

I liked it. Haiku are fun. Demon... what rhyme?

It's not just 3 plain lines o.o There's supposed to be a certain amount of syllabels per line...17 syllables total. First line has 5 syllabels, second has 7, and the third has 5 syllables <.< Buuuut...we won't hold you strongly to that wink My own haikus don't match that and most haikus translated from Japanese don't follow it afterwards. Techinquely you can make it longer...a series of 3 or 4 haikus as one poem... I'd rather see you try a couple more standard ones first though ^.^