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Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 3:41 pm
 [Image by Irk of Deviantart] [ } Introduction{ ] I suppose I should welcome you to the thread and apologize if I've done anything dreadfully wrong. I could find no form or basic anything to fill out, so I'll just have to hope and ad-lib it, pretending I have some semblance of an idea of what I'm doing.
To begin, some form of a Table of Contents is in order?Quote: [Post One] - Introduction/Table of Contents/About Theri/Myself [Post Two] - Essential Stats/Art [Post Three] - History/Explaination [Post Four] - Reserved for when I figure out what I'm missing [Post Five] - Reserved again [Post Six] - Final reserve. You may Critique after this
[ }About Therius{ ] The OOC crap no one cares about.
I've been playing Therius for just over a year now and have become unimaginably attached to him. Sadly, there is one little drawback. Despite the fact that he was created to belong to a circus, where I play him, there simply are no Circus Dreams. At least not any that can pass themselves off as worthwhile.
As such, I've been simply itching to play him in a circus environment with other performers and such. To actually stick him where he belongs. Perhaps, but some stroke of luck, this, Cirque, may be where he belongs. [ }About the Player{ ] The s**t you -really- don't give a crap about.
Therius is probably my primary character. He's the only one I play publicly and I like to pretend that he's quite unique. He appears as commonly in The Golden Tether, the dream I play him in on Furcadia, as he does in my own sketchbook and I'll risk being called insane when I say that I truly have fallen for my own character.
Therius is a favourite. Always will be. He's adorable, yet freakish. Childish yet unimaginably adult. He's everything and nothing all rolled up into one adorable feathered little ball and perhaps one of the most unique characters to grace TGT. Or at least to spill from the annuls of my mind and not smell or look like utter crap. Therius is the character I'm known best for. And perhaps the one I'm most proud of. <3
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Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 4:37 pm
[ } General Character Stats{ ] (Note: The above was a commission drawn by Tsurali. It is NOT my art! All other art shown, however, is.)Name - Therius Race - Quetzalcoatl-Boy (often 'dumbed down' to 'chickenboy') Age - 23 Height - 4'0" Weight - 36lbs (due entirely to hollow bones) Build - Mildly pudgy, though still slender Birthplace - Uchquduq, Uzbekistan Ethnicity - Polynesian/Mayan (current) Nicknames - 'Chickenbutt', 'Dance', 'Socius', 'Retard', 'wtf is that' (yes, he does answer to this on occasion), 'Pretty', 'Mister Feathers', 'Featherbutt' Personality - Sweet, kind, gentle-hearted, and stubborn as a mule. World Type - B Talents - Contortion/Freak Show/Very Limited Fire-dancing and escaping on the side* Flaws - Stubbornness, naivety, too much pride, glory-hog, mute, albino, complete -refusal- to think things through; cannot fly, or eat meat or dairy products, afraid of water
*What, you think that when you can cram yourself into a half-foot-by-half-foot box...a few cage bars wouldn't be a problem? He also catches alight easily due to clumsiness and ignorance. Most attempts with fire end up with a few singes to either himself or his audience. x.x [ }General Character Overview & Personality{ ] Therius, mentally, is very childlike in many aspects. Personal space, and personal possessions, mean nothing unless they are his. For example, he'll sit on your head without a second thought nor invite, whether he knows you or not, but if you try and touch him, he'll 'complain'. He acts sporadically and entirely on impulse and typically thinks quite highly about himself. Though others are 'obligated' to get him things - food, drink, other things that require speech to acquire - he proceeds to continue with the desire to be very independent. Quite a little pile of contradictions, isn't he? Although some things are well beyond his mental grasp - sex, relationships, and so on - other things he can prove very mature and even over-educated about. And oddly enough, despite his simplistic view of teh world, he understands the human personality surprisingly well. Perhaps one of his biggest flaws is his stubbornness and self-pride. Debts, for example, must be paid; apologies must be accepted. His view of the world is quite simplistic, and very black and white. And if it isn't how he wants it, he'll make it how he wants it. If he wants to give you a present, you'll take it, even if the boy has to force you to. He's also quite sure he can do no wrong. He didn't fall off of the chair himself, someone pushed him. He didn't accidentally forget his own feet, someone tripped him. He didn't forget to watch what he was doing, someone else lit him on fire. Quite simple. He'll blame anyone else for his own mistakes. At least, he does in his mind. Grudges are worse. If you manage to get on the boy's good side from the start, good on you, it's not hard to do; but if you get on his bad side, it'll be a little harder to swing to his favour as, despite requiring his own apologies be accepted, he will rarely accept those of others.
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Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 4:42 pm
[ }History{ ] Perhaps this can explain? Unlike so many, Therius does not have a tragic past and history of slavery. Well, so many as those where he's come from, and those who I've see. Nor was he ever a hero! He simply was. Just your plain, average, every-day freakshow-boy. Born, loved by his parents, and loving his life.
You see, twenty-three years ago in an old, run-down circus there was a chicken-woman and a snakeman. Of course, neither were anything special, Neither had much in the way of talent and so they were kept specifically to the domain of the freakshow and put on display. Among the typical bearded lady and 'Worlds Tallest Midget' who stood a nice, average six foot tall; hidden between the Stripeless Zebra (which was actually just a horse) and the worlds supposedly only talking mute... -- Oh, yes, you're probably wondering: this wasn't really much of a side-show. The circus wasn't exactly popular and had to make do with what they could. As such, most of the side-show acts were...made-up. But not all. Some were as legit as they could be. - That 'Zebra' came from Africa, in the least... And the Tattooed lady ended up in hives at the application of anything temporary... At least she was real.
-- Ah. Back to the history.
Love blossomed within the cages the actors were held. Between a Naga which was kept specifically to be shown to the villages of humans that simply were too sheltered to know of such a race, and the chickenlady was, well... she was a common enough act.
Though rather abused. How many people had lit the poor woman on fire and taunted her with gravy and stuffing.
Hmm. I keep getting off track, don't I? Let's skip the parents and go on to Therius' childhood? His birth was nothing special. Chickenlady laid an egg and it hatched. Simple as that!
The Ringmaster of that circus saw something in the boy that made him special. He began to train the boy in contortionism as he'd been born with his father's spine. -- Oh, talentless parents I'd said? What snake -can't- bend. It makes too much sense. Even the ringmaster saw that. Therius was subjected to being pushed and pulled and stretched for hours on end, and when finally being forced into knots was over, he was forced to shovel elephant crap. And did so willingly.
Now, Therius was...sheltered, in a way. kept away from being teased and taunted. He was never put on display until his confidence and ego were certainly at a peak. And why? This was to be a star! Or so thought the ringmaster. Therius had talent! Had beauty...
He couldn't be punished! He was what would make that circus famous!
By the age of fourteen, he'd taken a few appearances on stage, working happily with flame and fire as well as bending and working them more than happily and smoothly into a single act.
But before he got a chance to become a star, the circus was closed down? Apparently someone had forgotten to pay taxes or some such and the circus went defunct. All the actors were sent off, and Therius was treated as nothing special of a sudden.
A year passed without any appearance of Therius. He remained wandering and thieving to keep fed for a good while until a lot of perverts decided to pick him up. It wasn't hard to lure him away. The same trick as with a child and supposed candy.
Ah, Therius! You always choose food.
The boy was bought from the men, however, by a passing caravan and later on sold to yet another circus. But this is where the less-than-happy part of dear Therius' life began. All his other homes had been happy and accepting and loving... ...some in less welcome ways but loving none-the-less!
He was fifteen by this point, being beaten for speaking as before he'd been such a talkative boy. But freaks were meant to be seen and not heard, he was told. What time he wasn't being beaten for speaking he was being drowned for being a klutz.
He'd been told, at one point, by 'Mister', that he was useless. That he was ugly. And that people only paid to see him because he was hideous. This is where the boy's need for attention began.
It is said that when, during childhood, a person is deprived of something, they seek it out later in life. This is shown by the oral and a**l personalities as described by Sigmund Freud. You didn't suck on your thumb enough when you were a child, so you suck on booze and cigarettes now. The same happened with Therius' need for attention. He left from a kind and caring home filled with reassurance for his worth to a place where he was worthless entirely.
By the age of seventeen he'd escaped. He'd easilly tired of the place and, with a few others, slid away in the night. All went their own separate ways, and Therius returned to trying to find a loving, caring home in which he could belong.
... FIN?
[ }Stupid s**t No-one Cares About~{ ] -} Therius is aquaphobic. He despises water in quantities for more than a cup due to almost having drowned in the elephant's trough when he was sixteen. He'd been pushed down beneath the water as punishment for tripping and spilling the horse's hay. Naturally, he cannot swim. (Sorry to those who read this previously. My chronology got ******** up. ^^ wink
-} Therius is not entirely mute. During his second job with the second circus, he was beaten for speaking as the Ringmaster quite believed that 'children are to be seen, not heard'. He refrains from speaking, laughing, or making any other sound unless emotions get the best of him or he completely trusts the one he is speaking to. If he ever speaks it will be in a whisper, in the other's ear or a loud, high-pitched scream in terribly broken English.
-} If Therius could comprehend fetishes, he'd have two: Feet, and exhibitionism. He's always had this strange obsession with gnawing on his own toes. And exhibitionism, well... he loves attention and crowds. This should be a natural.
-} Therius is Sandwich-sexual. He has no sexual drive what-so-ever and prefers food to any form of physical love. Is it possible to get him 'in the mood'? Possibly, but no one has ever managed. It's debatable whether or not puberty has even kicked in yet.
-} Despite a love of fire, Therius has set himself alight through his own clumsiness a total of fifty-eight times since he began working with poi and staves. He continues to bare this 'pyromania' despite this.
-} The boy is completely irrational. Trying to explain a simple point of logic is like trying to toilet-train a duck: it's just not going to happen.
-} He has no concept of ownership or personal space unless it is his own. His turf is his turf, as well, and he does not take kindly to others encroaching upon his duties. Naturally, he wouldn't work well with a team.
-} He has been known to be very forceful if it suits him. He's also got a history of catfights with other contortionists. Competition must be crushed, apparently.
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Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 4:48 pm
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Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 4:50 pm
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Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 4:59 pm
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Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 7:21 pm
Okay. I'm going to be harsh, but you're a big boy, so I figure you can take it.
You've spent your entire first post talking about how much you LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE this character, but I don't see enough to him to love. Sure, you have a personality and some cool art, but other that that it's nothing, and it's certainly nothing that really sets him apart. The cirque already has a cute, short, immature character and at least three more of them in the concept threads. Come up with something that makes him special. Maybe he has a deep dark past. Maybe he escaped from a mad scientist's lab. The point is, stop talking about how imaginative and creative he is and make him that way. You can't just take his existing history and stick him into the cirque. You're going to have to tweak him some. The more interesting a character's history, the more interesting the character.
The talents you've picked are overdone. Pick something that plays off his unique species. If he's covered in feathers, fire dancing isn't practical. With bird bones I could see him doing contortion, but there are so many contortion concepts around that I'd really like to see someone pull something completely new and original out. I know that since there's technically not a cirqueling doing contortion, you can still quest it, but they've been here longer, so it's a little rude to start questing it now without OK-ing it with them.
He strikes me as a male Wing-Ting right now. Read through the other concepts and journals and make Therius stand out.
I have a very strong feeling that you can make it work. Just put some more effort into making him as unique and original as you keep saying he is.
Good luck!
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Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 10:32 pm
Thanks! I'll probably need it. XD
I suppose the concept is a little over-done, and I do... spout about Theri perhaps a little too much.
I suppose...it's hard to see what sets him apart without -really- seeing him in action. But I can see where you're coming from, quite easily. I suppose the 'cute young naive' thing is a little overdone but I like to pretend show that I've switched it up just a little bit. For such a naive person, he's rather...dominant. It's hard to explain, I suppose.
Theri's history is quite easily modified as it hasn't been 'set in stone' as this or that. There's just a few basic concepts I've based him on. Most of which are learned in Psych 101 >.>
I understand that there are a lot of circus acts based off of the whole basic idea of contortion, and I do try to keep Theri realistic while still keeping him...extraordinary. I know the limits of the human body, and I push them to a certain degree with him, but I do see what you're talking about. Contortion->Not as original in a circus as in an every-day sort of setting.
As for the 'not practical' thing with the fire-dancing, hmm... That's the reason I put 'Limited'. He's set himself alight more than once of his own idiocy at times. Though he's not covered in feathers, those tail-feathers do flit about and get in the way from time to time.
I'll do my best to expand a little, and once I get the History section up, I hope that'll bring a bit more into it.
Thank you for teh help! ^_^
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Posted: Mon Jan 15, 2007 10:49 am
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Posted: Mon Jan 15, 2007 2:53 pm
Bravo! I like the character much better now that you have his history up. It all makes sense now, and you've done a good job of justifying everything.
Go ahead and quest contortion. It makes sense. smile
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Posted: Thu Jan 18, 2007 8:26 pm
I'm only half done. His personality and feralistic-while-still-being-semi-civil-ways come in in the second half! O:
Let's hope it manages to get approved? If I'm lucky. XD
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Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2007 12:51 am
Just one thing I have to question: How is it that Therius almost drowned and can't swim? Did he have weights tied onto his legs or something? With hollow bones and barely any heft to him, it seems like he'd have little issues with water. Source: Why can't penguins fly?, where it brings up- "all flying birds have hollow bones. In contrast, to be a successful diver a penguin wants to keep it's weight high, so they have solid bones". He'd be a lot less dense than even a normal person would, I'd think, and would probably have more problems trying to keep his body under the surface than he would staying above water. Otherwise... I gotta say, I love his design to death. XD He looks like a character that would be a lot of fun to play, and could have some interesting dynamics with other characters. The main thing I'd love to see, as always with hybrids, is a little genetic dysfunction; some of that seems to be expressed through his albinoism, but it seems like there could be more development there. Is he sterile? What would you guess his life expectancy is? All of his organs are in proper working order? How about any physical effects of his contortionism training as a child; did it ever go too far, were there lasting effects, what would have happened if he were pushed beyond his limits? That's about all I can think of just now, though. <3 I can't wait to see how things progress!
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Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 5:19 pm
That's not 'one' thing! That's, like, fi'tty!
That all comes in the second half of his history. he's completely flightless due to his size in relation to the size of his wings, for example, and he almost drowned due to something of a punishment. You try not drowning with your head held under the water. <3 I don't think that Therius does have too much in the form of limits due to being partially snake however there is, of course, the fact that bendy or not, you can't tie straight bones into knots. However, he is still limited at current to what he has trained himself to do. He'd need (a lot) more training (and being convinced!) to go much further. (Such a stubborn thing. Thinks he's the bee's knees! Training? He don't need no stinkin' training! He's the best there ever was for Chrissake! XD) He is still bound to the basics of anatomy of course. His ribcage can only bend so far, his pelvis and tibia/fibula/femur/etc all cannot be bent save a slight amount of give and elasticity that is apparent in all bones.
His bones, also, are quite fragile being hollow and with Therius being malnourished. This could probably also be easily added two with the fact that he is a hybrid. He is easily broken if he falls from a height of more than about four or five feet. Not that this has ever stopped him.
Therius would be sterile, certainly, and I like to think of his complete lack of sex-drive as something of a dysfunction. All beings are seen to have a need to mate and produce offspring and that just don't work with Therius. Not in the least. (In full honesty someone offered him the choice of sex and a piece of lettuce between two slices of bread once... ...he took the sandwich.)
You've really forced a bit more thinking into the physiology of Therius than I ever really thought into though., Thank you! And I'll try and figure some more dysfunctions out that couldn't be attributed to other parts of him as well. Promise! <3
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Posted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 12:24 am
... Well, it started out with one thing, I swear! XDDD
Ahhhh, the punishment thing makes a lot more sense. In my head, he'd fallen into it when he was a little kid or something, and that's why I was doubtful on that point.
Gotta love that attitude of his, seriously. ;o; He is ENTIRELY too cute.
Hm... to the "falling = broken bones" thing. Remember to consider his weight when you figure something like that. Weak bones or no, falling a few feet isn't going to have as much effect on him as it would if you or I fell that same length. Now, if a pressure equal to that of someone our weight falling that amount were applied to one of his bones, it'd be practically guaranteed to crack, but I'm not sure how sound it is to say that falls like that would result in injury.
Hey, man, you never know; that could've been some really good lettuce! D:
I'm glad to have been able to help, in whatever way I could. ^^ Therius is a really interesting character, and... well, I guess I don't have to say that I think it would be fun to roleplay him, it looks like you've gotten to do that a fair bit already. XD He seems like he'd work in well enough with the Cirque setting, at least, so seriously- best of luck!
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Posted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 11:50 am
Le Cirque du Gaia Thank you! I'll need it. =_=
- Crap! Crap crap poop s**t excrement! I totally didn't think about that! You totally caught me! >.< I guess he wouldn't hurt himself too much especially with all that padding.
...Well damn my dicknipples. I've got more thinking out to do after all! O: I'll get the second half of the history up quite soon though! <3
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