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 Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 9:55 pm
Stranded in the middle of the desert
I'm wondering why
How can it be?
Why, didn't you love me?
How can I accept this lie
Another time another life
My worries and my strife
Why did you care Why were you
So constiently there
What does it mean
These lost hopes and dreams
Trying to take control
Seeking a weakness
Some kind of uselessness
I've tried so hard
But in the end
You were spellbound by his scheming mind
How can it be
That you have forgotten me
Thrown aside
Left with a burden inside
All that I ask
Is why?
Aang lost Katara to Zuko and he feels a great loss for her and poures out his thoughts.
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Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 12:24 pm
Aw... Poor Aang... Very nice! And it had a very unique rhyming scheme. The only thing I have to say is that "How can I except this lie" should be "How can I accept this lie"
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Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 2:34 am
3nodding Yeah but i did that at 2:45am.I was tired.Oh an I thought that Aang might feel that way.His isn't going to give her up without a fight.I know that.So this was Aang's emotions.If you give me ideas I might do another.
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Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2007 1:24 pm
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