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Arekkusanda
Captain

PostPosted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 6:53 pm


Hey, This is my Fanfic. Thread..

This follows up after the Gaang has left Ba Sing Se with the Earth King.


Here we go..


PART ONE

Appa groaned as the Gaang was arguing about where to go next...

"We need to go back to Jeong Jeong!" Aang said.

"How do you even know he is still alive?!?" Katara exclaimed.

"Will you guys just SHUT UP? We aren't going to accomplish anything by ARGUING! " Sokka pulled out a map, and pointed to a small, ring shaped island.

"That's where we are going, it is a school for firebenders, but it is disbanded from the fire nation, so we shouldn't have any trouble."

"Sokka, are you sure about this..?" Katara said, unsure..

"Of course I'm sure.." Sokka replied.

Appa soared off into the horizon.

END OF PART ONE


Part Two
Aang sighed as the night wore on...

"How am I supposed to master firebending...."

Aang looked at the rest of the gaang, sleeping.
"If I can't even master settling arguments, even with my friends..?"

The next day, the group arrived in a small valley near the firebending school.

"Stop right there!" An unfamiliar voice shouted..

A group of fire nation soldiers sprouted from the bushes.

Everyone took their positions.


TO BE CONTINUED....


PART THREE

Aang reared back... and spun around, flung his fists in the air......

And grabbed everyone in the Gaang.

"RUUUUUNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

He took off with them.

The firebender soldiers stood confused...

Then Momo hovered above them, something round in his paws...

The soldiers couldn't make out what it was...

Momo's object dropped....

Ker-plunk!

It hit one of the soldiers in the head, and knocked him out on the ground.

To Be Continued...
mrgreen



UPDATES:
1/08 : Made all one color/ added second part.
1/10 : Added third part! Sorry I havent updated, been busy.. x.x





I AM CURRENTLY NOT ACCEPTING IDEAS

Thank you!
PostPosted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 12:25 pm


Cool beginning! Uh... But could you try to keep it all one color? It gets annoying when it's all rainbowish. Other than that, awesome!

AirGirl Phantom


Maeve Avari

PostPosted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 2:42 pm


-claps-
Okay! that's pretty good! it's short, but good! and THAT"S what counts -nods-
PostPosted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 6:04 pm


Part Two is good too. Thanks for changing the color. It's easier to read now.

AirGirl Phantom


Arekkusanda
Captain

PostPosted: Wed Jan 10, 2007 7:11 pm


Part 3 added ^_^
PostPosted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 2:04 pm


0o0o, yay. I'm going to take a wild guess and say that maybe the round object in Momo's paws was important? I don't know. But it's good so far. But how would Aang grab everyone in the Gaang and fly off with them?????? question

AirGirl Phantom


Arekkusanda
Captain

PostPosted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 5:30 pm


AirGirl Phantom
0o0o, yay. I'm going to take a wild guess and say that maybe the round object in Momo's paws was important? I don't know. But it's good so far. But how would Aang grab everyone in the Gaang and fly off with them?????? question



ninja
PostPosted: Thu Jan 18, 2007 4:05 pm


*sigh*... where do I even begin?!

1. It was too short - but this isn't as important
2. It's all over the place
3. Toph wasn't there when they met Jeong Jeong xd

Jessarai


Arekkusanda
Captain

PostPosted: Thu Jan 18, 2007 5:38 pm


Jessarai
3. Toph wasn't there when they met Jeong Jeong xd



Fix'd
PostPosted: Mon Jan 22, 2007 3:15 pm


a30993
Jessarai
3. Toph wasn't there when they met Jeong Jeong xd



Fix'd

That's better!!

Jessarai


elessarra

PostPosted: Tue Sep 02, 2008 1:06 pm


really neat, but really short. . . any description plz?
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