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 Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 10:03 am
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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 10:19 am
you don't like to use white??
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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 10:34 am
something about the right hip seems strange..
is she supposed to be black?
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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 11:23 am
Jumble you don't like to use white?? Actually, the fact that my last two major illustrations have been of black women is a coincidence.
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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 11:24 am
Chowder88 something about the right hip seems strange.. is she supposed to be black? -It's probably the indent. I didn't convey it properly in the CG. -Yes. The person who commissioned this had a black avatar.
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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 11:50 am
I'd suggest that you mix up the background somehow? It seems to me that the figure is allright but the overall presentation is lacking something.
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Dr. Valentine Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 12:10 pm
Dr. Valentine I'd suggest that you mix up the background somehow? It seems to me that the figure is allright but the overall presentation is lacking something. I hahahate the background. Seriously. I am not sure how to make better ones.
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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 1:01 pm
Her face looks kinda wonky. Yeahhh... I dunno.
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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 4:40 pm
Her knees shouldn't be turning in like that.
Her torso goes in too much at the waist. Girls are curvy but not THAT curvy. Not usually anyway. And her breasts look unnaturally big. The shading on her right arm makes it look flat. Try moving the highlight on the forearm more toward the center of the arm instead of having at the edge.
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Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 1:50 pm
The Iconoclast Dr. Valentine I'd suggest that you mix up the background somehow? It seems to me that the figure is allright but the overall presentation is lacking something. I hahahate the background. Seriously. I am not sure how to make better ones. Well she is black and red and brown and ribbony and belty so I'd do a background that added to those things - either some desaturated bluegreen to bring contrast to the table, or some swooshy red stuffs with black stars?
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Dr. Valentine Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 4:05 pm
Jadie Her knees shouldn't be turning in like that. Her torso goes in too much at the waist. Girls are curvy but not THAT curvy. Not usually anyway. And her breasts look unnaturally big. The shading on her right arm makes it look flat. Try moving the highlight on the forearm more toward the center of the arm instead of having at the edge. Her arm shading is messed up, I agree. Her anatomy was exaggerated on purpose, though - I know know know know everybody hates that excuse, but in the case of a pin up, I think it's legitimate.
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Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 6:20 pm
The Iconoclast Jumble you don't like to use white?? Actually, the fact that my last two major illustrations have been of black women is a coincidence. lol.. i meant that it doesnt seem like you used any white idk everything is like this weird offwhitegray color
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Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 7:10 pm
Jumble The Iconoclast Jumble you don't like to use white?? Actually, the fact that my last two major illustrations have been of black women is a coincidence. lol.. i meant that it doesnt seem like you used any white idk everything is like this weird offwhitegray color Ah, the boyfriend and psytoasty say don't use white.
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Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 8:42 am
The Iconoclast Jumble The Iconoclast Jumble you don't like to use white?? Actually, the fact that my last two major illustrations have been of black women is a coincidence. lol.. i meant that it doesnt seem like you used any white idk everything is like this weird offwhitegray color Ah, the boyfriend and psytoasty say don't use white. I've heard that, too, and it makes sense... Someone told me it was because true white (and black) isn't found in nature, but also think about the fact that you would never highlight with white, nor would you shade with black. It would be like using the 'lighten' and 'darken' tools in photoshop (well, paint shop pro has them. I have no idea about photoshop) to color with. Basically it's wrong and it looks horrible. I can see what Jumble means, though. Part of it makes me think it's the way you colored her boots and sword, since it's all solid greys. And compared to the skin and the scarf, they don't really look finished. Part of it makes me think it's just the background color you picked, because I really hate it. I think that maybe an olive green or some sort of green-yellow color would have worked better.
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Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 9:32 am
SilverTiger The Iconoclast Jumble The Iconoclast Jumble you don't like to use white?? Actually, the fact that my last two major illustrations have been of black women is a coincidence. lol.. i meant that it doesnt seem like you used any white idk everything is like this weird offwhitegray color Ah, the boyfriend and psytoasty say don't use white. I've heard that, too, and it makes sense... Someone told me it was because true white (and black) isn't found in nature, but also think about the fact that you would never highlight with white, nor would you shade with black. It would be like using the 'lighten' and 'darken' tools in photoshop (well, paint shop pro has them. I have no idea about photoshop) to color with. Basically it's wrong and it looks horrible. I can see what Jumble means, though. Part of it makes me think it's the way you colored her boots and sword, since it's all solid greys. And compared to the skin and the scarf, they don't really look finished. Part of it makes me think it's just the background color you picked, because I really hate it. I think that maybe an olive green or some sort of green-yellow color would have worked better. Yeah, the background is tres fail, in every way. Does anybody know of good tutorials on CGing metal? I'm experimenting to figure this out, but a little help would be appreciated.
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