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my poems. some with good emotions built behind them, some darker. its my art. its who i am.

Never forget how she makes you feel
Never regret that this feeling is real

The time we've shared
It isn't a dream
I can't help but notice
How you're sowing up my seams
Everything I've ever had
Doesn't seem to compare to you
These feelings indised
Somehow I know are true

I'll never forget how you make me feel
Ill never regret that this feeling is real
You hold my hear in the palm of your hands
Every choice made now, my decision stands

You've been with me
Though distance has seperated us
You still stand here by me
And i still give you all my trust
My heart races from your touch
As you send shivers down my spine
And i desire to be with you
Until the end of all time

[[UNFINISHED]]

You've done a wonderful job so far though you have a few spelling errors, but don't we all at times? sweatdrop The ones I could find for the first poem are:
Entranced by the shadows that overwhelm
Succumbing to the crimson tears i find
Separating body from soul
Yesterdays regrets holding me in a bind

Due to you spelling Entranced "intranced" to make the I Miss You, I would recommend changing the word to: immersed, so it still works. smile

For the second poem:
How you're sewing up my seams
These feelings inside
I’ll never regret that this feeling is real
Though distance has separated us

These really are lovely poems, and I think it's very interesting that you're using the lowercase "i" as the form of expressing yourself. Very clever.