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 Posted: Thu Dec 28, 2006 9:33 am
Well, where should I begin? Oh, yeah. Story takes place around the feudal Japan era. This takes place a few months after the death of the legendary samurai, Miyamoto Musashi. After the death of the greatest samurai who ever lived, people had this question pop up into their heads, "Who will save us now from any future evil?" Anywho, there was a young man (age 17), who idolized Musashi's ways. His name was Toshi Takahashi. He had dreams of being the next "Japanese Hero".
next time: the adventure begins.
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Posted: Fri Dec 29, 2006 10:12 am
Now, Toshi was a young man with big dreams of being the next Japanese Hero like his idol, Miyamoto Musashi. One day, he decided that he would go travel to the next town in order to receive training for his samurai skills. He hd the basics down pat, but he wanted to push himself to the next level. So, he went on to the town of Otaka, twenty miles away from his homeland of Koto. He knew he had to pack thoroughly, because it wasn't gonna be easy. There were many demons and thugs within those twenty miles. So, he added his wolden sword and a few shirikin knives. His quest to become a great samurai would not start off easily. It would begin rocky. Now, Toshi was ready for his adventure. He set out for Otaka.
Next time: Day one on the road to Otaka.
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Posted: Fri Dec 29, 2006 3:16 pm
Kino was a pretty laid back guy. He had no real ambitions accept to live a peaceful life going to work coming home and being with his family, a wife 2 daughters and a son. He was only 17 but this was what he had planned out. However this one day he decided that before he could live in peace he had to live through trials. He decided to take a perilous journey to Otaka from Koto.
He had heard of much terror on that 20 mile stretch and he only saw adventure, oh the follies of youth. So he packed up everything he owned and left for Otaka. "Oops almost forgot my knife." kino said and hurried back for his one sole weapon in the world.
Next biggrin ay one on Road to Otaka
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Posted: Sun Dec 31, 2006 11:52 pm
Now, Toshi was traveling to Otaka. Things were looking out to be great so far. As he went on through, he met up with this one young man about his age , in a yellow yukata. Toshi greeted him, and went on. After traveling five miles, he was a little tired. Little did Toshi know, but the man in the yellow yukata was following him. Once the man noticed that Toshi was tired, he decided to attack him from behind and take his stuff. Little did he know, but Toshi had skills with his wooden sword. He was the best wooden swordsman in his town. Once the yellow man threw his first punch, Toshi went down. But he was not out. Toshi grabbed his sword and, with quick, graceful speed, he attacked the young man directly on his head. The man was knocked out cold. At the end, Toshi continued on towards Otaka. He had only 15 miles to go.
Next time: Day two on the Road to Otaka.
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Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 2:16 pm
Day 2:
Now, Toshi has traveled 5 miles in one day. He pressed on for Otaka. As he was walking, he focused his attention on a small crowd of people. He noticed it was three guys and a young woman. The woman wanted to get away from them, but they ganged up on her. Noticing the situation, he charged at them and yelled "Leave her alone". The men turned towards Toshi, and pulled out their knives. Toshi was caught off guard, because he was a two feet away when they pulled out the weapons. He tried to dodged their vicious attacks. He was slightly slashed by each of the men. He had a cut on his abdomen, his right shoulder, and his right cheek. As soon as he created a distance of three feet from the thugs, he released a vicious attack of his own. These actually were direct hits on his enemies. He had helped the young lady out. She walked up to Toshi, and then slapped him and ran away on the road ahead. Toshi was very confused. He had knocked out the three men and helped get the young lady out of the jam. So, he wondered, "Why did she slap me for helping her." Anyways, he walked on. He walked another 5 miles. He stopped to sleep. But, as hard as he tried, he couldn't help but think about the events that took place during this day. He couldn't sleep, so he got up from his blanket and walked the road ahead for another 5 miles. He was overcame with fatigue, so he fainted and slept all throghout the next morning. 15 miles was done, but he had to awake before he could go the last 5 miles to get to Otaka.
Next Time: Day 3
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Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2007 12:16 pm
Day 3, part one:
Toshi soon awakened. But, instead of being in the spot where he once fainted, he was in a jail cell. He was so confused in why he was here. he yelled "What's going on? I'm not supposed to be here!"
One man in a grey yukata walked over and told him "Shut up, criminal! You know exactly what you're here for."
"No, I don't." said Toshi.
"Well, you were turned in by three young men who claimed that you caused a great deal of trouble. They explained that they were trying to help a young lady find her way. While they were doing so, you came in and just assualted them for no reason at all!"
"That is not true! They were the trouble makers, and I was the one that came to the aid of the young lady."
"I don't believe you. Also, your gonna pay the price for your conduct", said the guard."
"What does that mean", said Toshi.
"You'll see", said the guard.
So, Toshi had to figure out a way to get out of this tough situation that he found himself in. He knew that he didn't commit a single crime. But instead, was a figure he stopped a crime in its tracks. But, Toshi realized that this was a sign of revenge by those three thugs. He was so angry at them. He knew, though, that his anger couldn't solve anything at the moment, except make him look even more guilty than innocent.
Now, he had to think of a plan to get out of jail. He figured that his only hope was to wait until the guards come give him his so-called "punishment". So now, Toshi Takahashi had sit in his dirty cell and play the waiting game.
Next time: Day 3, part two, "The Plan"
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Posted: Mon Jan 15, 2007 2:40 pm
Day 3, part two: "The Plan"
Now, Toshi waited for about 3 hours. It had seemed like an eternity. He was anxious to make his attempt for an escape. He finally heard some footsteps coming towards his cell. There, three men appeared and unlocked the door. Two of the men went on each side of Toshi and tightly grabbed his arms. The other one gave a little message to Toshi.
"It's time, you disgraceful human-being. You will receive a punishment that will make you never feel the same again."
So now, the men lead Toshi into a small open ground area. Here, it contained five men. These weren't ordinary men. Instead, they appeared to be special martial artists. Each man wore a different colored cloak. Those colors were red, orange, green, blue, and yellow.
The two men who were constricting Toshi slung him in the middle of the five martial artists. The leader had then said, "You are going to be beaten half to death. We will give you a chance to protect yourself, but it won't do you a bit of good. These five men are the most highly trained students that Otaka has to offer. There is no way you can escape without serious injures. Now we bid you farawell for now, until we have to pick up the pieces that are left of you."
So the three guards left. Toshi then realized that he was either in or very near the city of Otaka. But the only problem was that he was trapped in the middle of five highly trained martial arts students in a jail site. He knew if he was to escape, he had to get through tis fight.
So now, with five martial arts students surrounding him, Toshi exclaimed, "I am Toshi Takahashi and I will get by all five of you!"
He then got into his fighting stance, and got ready for the tough battle ahead.
Next time: Day 3, part three: "Fight for Freedom"
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Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2007 1:43 pm
dude you should wright a story or a book or something.
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Blue-Ultimate Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 11:48 am
^You Really think so? I'll think about it. But in the mean time, I will share these excerpts from my beautiful mind.
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Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 12:45 pm
Day 3, part 3: "Fight for Freedom"
What is a hero? One who stands up for what's right? One who stands up for the weak? Someone who stands up for his own beliefs?
For Toshi, he was defending himself with all three of these circumstances. He was standing up for what he believed in, he stood up for what was right, and stood up for his weakened body.
But, he now had to face five highly trained martial artists. Each with a different colored cloak. The one in the orange stepped forward and said,"this little punk's mine". The others shook their heads and let him through. It appeared that Toshi would go one-on-one with these young men. While he was in his stance he said, "Bring it on! I'm not afraid of you! Do your worst!
"Very well," said the orange martial artist.
The orange man charged at Toshi with incredible speed. The fight was offially on. He charged and nailed Toshi directly on his right cheek. Takahashi would then be forced forward from the impact of that powerful punch. Keep in mind, Toshi was not a very strong or powerful young man. He only stood 5 foot 5, weighing only 120 pounds. So, he felt every bit of impact of the punch. Takahashi felt some pain.
Getting up, rubbing his right cheek, Toshi said "Ouch, you hit so hard. Is that all ya got. Come on, you can do better than that."
"Are you insane?" said the orange man.
"No, but I know if you five want me serious hurt or even dead, your gonna have to step up more than that."
"That's it, you want to die? Fine. Forget one-on-one guys, let's kill this cocky weakling right now!"
The others immediately agreed. Toshi was about to go against all five men. He was staring death right in the eyes. So now, toshi was gonna fight for not only his freedom, but also his life.
Now, all five of these men charged at Toshi, ready to do some serious damage. Toshi looked at them very sharply in order to find an opening. All of a sudden, he found one. He saw that the orange man was gonna attack first with the same punch he did earlier. Instead of taking the punch like he did the first time, he ducked and gave him a mean right upper cut. Then he turned and saw the blue one do a sweeping kick. Toshi jumped and threw a random round kick on the green man. After that, he did a sweeding kick of his own to knock down the blue man. Afterwards, Toshi dodged some blows from the yellow man. Then grabbed his right arm, and slung him on his back. He then focused his attention on the red martial artist.
The red man said "Everyone stop. I will take this guy all by myself. something tells me this isn't no ordinary young man. I'm the leader of this group and i will take him on." He then turned his attention to Toshi. "Who are you?"
"My name is Toshi Takahashi and I will get out of jail for a crime I never committed in the first place."
"Your words are powerful, but there is no chance you will get out of here. But, I tell ya what. How 'bout you and me making a deal? If you beat me, your free. How bout it?"
"Can I trust you? I'm not sure about you and your buddies".
"Look, I got the key right here." He showed Toshi the key to freedom. "Now, alls you have to do is beat me and your free, no strings attached."
"Sounds good to me," said Toshi.
So now, Toshi had only one guy standing in his way for his freedom. Could he win his freedom or fall trying? He once again got in his stance and prepared for his big fight.
Next time: Day 3, part four: "A Fighting Chance"
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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 3:33 pm
Day 3, part 4: "A Fighting Chance"
Why do people fight? People fight for many reasons? Some fight for the sport of it. Some fight to gain supremacy. Some fight for the weak. Some fight for what they believe in. But some even fight for their lives. This was the circumstance that Toshi Takahashi was in.
While he was in his stance, the red martial artist charged at him with a speed three times faster than the speed that the orange student had. Toshi barely dodged the punch, but was then tripped up with a sweeeping kick in which the red man followed up with. Toshi immediately fell on his back, but then rolled to his left to avoid a powerful elbow drop.
Toshi kicked himself up off the ground, but the red man was waiting on him and delivered a left hook to the chin. Toshi was lifted in the air and then the red matial artist delivered an elbow thrust to the gut. Toshi was knocked five feet away, with the air taken out of him. As he was gasping for air, the red man nonchalantly stood in front of Toshi.
"Ha! You are pathetic. I should have known that you weren't very good without your wooden sword. Your just like all the rest of these samurai. You can fight your best battles with your weapon, but your worst with only your fists and feet."
"I'm not weak,"said Toshi. "I am strong and I will find a way to defeat you."
"Whatever you say," said the red man.
Once Toshi caught his breath again, he this time charged at the red martial artist. He though a powerful right hand towards his opponent. But, the red man brushed Toshi's arm to the side and delivered a right hand of his own, which directly hit Toshi in the right cheek. Toshi went flying several feet away from the red man.
"Why don't you just give up, fool. You are no match for my martial arts skills. Your just good at using a sword, and nothing more. Just give up, and we will return you to your cell in one piece.
"No!" exclaimed Toshi. "I will not give up and stay in jail for a crime I never commited in the first place. Yeah, I'm at a disadvantage fighting you, but I don't quit. Like I said, y'all are gonna either seriously injure me or even kill me, because I will NEVER QUIT!"
"Fine", said the red man. "But it's your funeral"
Toshi was a little bit bloodied, battered, and bruised. But, he was still determined to fight for his right to freedom. Slowly, he got back into his fighting stance and got ready for the red martial artist.
Next Time: Day 3, part 5: "A Second Wind"
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