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Where were you when the world died?
  Drinking beer at home and watching TV :D
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Biological_Warfare

PostPosted: Wed Dec 27, 2006 2:37 pm


This is a second one I made up and wrote a little bit. Like the other one, I have little clue as to where it will lead.
PostPosted: Wed Dec 27, 2006 2:48 pm


'You cannot run'

'Get out of my head'

'Surrender now and live'

'I said get out of my head you creep'

'You'll only hurt yourself if you struggle.'

"God d*** it!!! Stay out of my head," Kent scremed aloud, shutting off the connection between him and a man fifty yards away. Kent drew back on the bow in his hands and sent the barbed arrow notched in it whistling toward the man's heart. It bounced off an invisible barrier before it even got close.

The man, who was pupil-less and was wearing flowing red robes, smiled and spoke softly, "Your arrows are no match for my magic. However, I have no wish to stain my hands with your blood. Be happy that I'm giving you a fighting chance. Guards, kill him."

Four men who had been standing behind the mage stepped forward and slowly began circling Kent. Kent waited calmly, his only move to drop the bow and to draw his sword and a similar sword that was forked.

((girl with the green hair
great comic by the way.))

Biological_Warfare


Winry_Rockbell799

PostPosted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 12:44 pm


I like the way you start out the story. It really draws the reader in! ^^ And I also like the dialogue, too! Both characters personalities are really starting to come out in their voices! I hope you continue! ^^
PostPosted: Wed Jan 31, 2007 7:14 pm


Too bad one of them isn't going to last for long. twisted

Biological_Warfare

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