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Ei-Kichi St Alth

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 24, 2006 10:24 pm


And here I sit on Christmas eve,
'tis already quarter past two.
I wish I could open my presents,
They're just in the next room.

My parents said I have to wait,
For them to see morning light.
I do not think that I can do it,
This urge, I cannot fight.

I want to rip the paper,
To tear the wrapping to shred.
Instead I sit here writing
poetry, in my bed.


Yea, so my English 12 teacher assigned us this thing where over Christmas break we're supposed to make ourselves a "Poetry Portfolio". Since I hate poetry and can't write it worth beans, I'm just gonna wing it. This will end up being my 10th or eleventh poem, and I don't have any paper here to write on, so I'm going to write here. ^^ I fail at the interwebs! And that thing some people talk about... I think it's "liphe"
PostPosted: Sun Dec 24, 2006 10:27 pm


Your poetry is fine,
and I know what you mean,
Sometimes it's hard
living this life
Homework stretches the limits
Of what can and can not be done
Weakens the bridges
Many kids have built
It stomps through the imagination
Tearing up the place as it goes
Hear it roar

Is that it


Over there?


By your toes?

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 24, 2006 10:38 pm


Classrooms give my mind a
Limit
constantly obstructing my
Creativity
the walls close in on me
Blocking
me off from the outside
World
forcing me to think within
Myself
which is where I am the most
Afraid
PostPosted: Mon Dec 25, 2006 7:18 am


You could write haiku
They are poems after all
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 25, 2006 8:54 am


Sieg Reyu.2
You could write haiku
They are poems after all
Refridgerator


He wants "variety".
PostPosted: Mon Dec 25, 2006 10:06 am


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What about a lymerick fine?
Something simple to pass the time.
Not too hard to do,
So easy for you!
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 25, 2006 12:07 pm


I have a page long limerick, I think it's on my old computer though. It's for in my portfolio.
PostPosted: Mon Dec 25, 2006 12:15 pm


Buzz is not good with poetry,
it's simple to see.
can someone help me?
it wouldn't be free,
*looks over at the Chritmas tree*

SCORE!!!!!!!!

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 25, 2006 12:28 pm


Christmas Poetry
Ikichi fails at life here
Posting on the net.

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 25, 2006 12:39 pm


buzzkid24
Buzz is not good with poetry,
it's simple to see.
can someone help me?
it wouldn't be free,
*looks over at the Chritmas tree*

SCORE!!!!!!!!


Go Buzz Go!!! xDDD ^^

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 25, 2006 12:50 pm


Eikichi Taro Stalth
buzzkid24
Buzz is not good with poetry,
it's simple to see.
can someone help me?
it wouldn't be free,
*looks over at the Chritmas tree*

SCORE!!!!!!!!


Go Buzz Go!!! xDDD ^^
*vows*
thank you, I try my best
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