Welcome to Gaia! ::

Well, I started this quite awhile before the date of the first chapter indicates. It just took me a long time to post it at mediaminer.org. The first chapter and probably the majority of the second chapter aren't the best but I think the third turned out well. I'm currently trying to work on the next so I might be able to get that up sometime soon if writer's block will leave me be for once.

He Loves Me Not

Synopsis :
"A shounen ai original I decided to write of two small side characters in another fanfic of mine. Sakura Ito and Yusuke Takahashi go to the same school but have never really spoken due to Yusuke's reputation as "the gay guy". That all changes one day however when a picnic table brings them together. ^_~"

^.^ I'm glad you like it. I'm having some trouble writing the next chapter though. XP It doesn't seem to want to get done. If you have any suggestions on anything you'd like to see or something feel free to make them. ^^;

you use "he" and "his" way too often and in too confusing of a way.

Example:
He slid his arms under his shirt and he kissed him.

Yusuke slid his arms under Sakura's shirt and kissed him.

I had actually just started rewriting the first chapter of this story when you posted. o__O I wanted to continue with it but my writing's a lot better now so I figured it would look weird if I didn't rewrite the other chapters. I'm not changing anything plot wise though so you wouldn't have to read anything over. XP I'll post here when I get the first chapter rewritten. ^^;