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 Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2006 6:36 pm
Hey, here's some of my art. I really need some crits and tell me HOW TO FIX IT!! dont just say "ur bad at bodys, man" Tell me some ideas to fix it. thankx.  Notebook cover. On the cross it says "this is not the end".  B-day pic for my DA little sister.  Silvana.  Aria.  Girl...  my soul. exclaim
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Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2006 7:47 pm
One suggestion may be that your chins are very noticably angled when they're kinda supposed to appear flowing towards the chin.
Edit: Eh, the more I look at them, they're not so bad afterall. I like the Lucy one. whee
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Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2006 5:47 pm
Dradeeus One suggestion may be that your chins are very noticably angled when they're kinda supposed to appear flowing towards the chin. Edit: Eh, the more I look at them, they're not so bad afterall. I like the Lucy one. whee Thanks. Lucy is my latest pic. rofl
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Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2006 5:56 pm
You have some decent art work, I say your pictures are pretty good. But you do need a little more work on the body, I know your skiny people, and its kinda hard to make them look right. But my suggestion is make make the arms sightly thicker, and when you do a side view or partical side view, you should try and think the body slightly as well.
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Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2006 6:23 pm
*SQUE~AL!!*
My RP characters name is Aria!!! I have to say that one is my favorite one!!
Um It's really good you've got great art work! I suggest arching the foot a little ((that's the first thing I saw))
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Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2006 6:40 pm
I absolutely love your style. It's unique and intresting. The chins are a bit narrow, but I usually look over stuff like that sweatdrop
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Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2006 6:47 pm
i Think you should work on the figure a little more to give it a good shape.
If you wish you could also make the neck a little longer.
I like it over all good job!! blaugh
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Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2006 7:02 pm
GinkitsuneYasha You have some decent art work, I say your pictures are pretty good. But you do need a little more work on the body, I know your skiny people, and its kinda hard to make them look right. But my suggestion is make make the arms sightly thicker, and when you do a side view or partical side view, you should try and think the body slightly as well. Thanks so much! I'm really working on that! Quote: *SQUE~AL!!* My RP characters name is Aria!!! I have to say that one is my favorite one!! Um It's really good you've got great art work! I suggest arching the foot a little ((that's the first thing I saw)) Arigato!! Aira is one of my favorate names! Quote: I absolutely love your style. It's unique and intresting. The chins are a bit narrow, but I usually look over stuff like that That means alot. Quote: i Think you should work on the figure a little more to give it a good shape. If you wish you could also make the neck a little longer. I like it over all good job!! Yeah, I've been playing around with the idea of makeing the necks a littel longer, but It's hard to find that middleground betwee no neck and goose neck. whee
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