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 Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 2:53 pm
Original/Portrait  Before suggestionsWHAT SHOULD I FIX?? I need help soon I wanna give this to my sister for christmas? Since she lives in a whole 'nother province. P.S Do you think its vain that I drew myself instead of her?
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Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 4:07 pm
Well...I don't know exactly what to tell you about it. It's good, although the nose seems a bit bigger than it is in reality...sort of the same with the eyes and mouth. But I don't think it's vain, considering that most likely she sees herself every day in the mirror and she'd probably rather see you.
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Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 8:26 pm
Hmm, the eyes are muchmuch too big. And the eyelashes are... bug leg-esque. xD Make them more solid and shorter.
AND, this probably sounds so rude, but... it's odd, cause typically your eyes are halfway down your head, and I was aboutta point that out, but then I measured on the portrait and... they weren't. oO;; So anyways, other than that it looks very good.
Very pretty. heart
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Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2006 5:51 am
As already stated, the eyes are much too large, and I think the lips are bit too big as well. Also, there's not much of a chin in your drawing, so if you could make it a bit longer that'd be good... I think the nose is a tiny bit too long too. The line of the jaw looks kind of sharp and hard (especially by the ear), but I'll assume you're going to shade that part in. x3
Looks nice so far. heart
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Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2006 10:30 pm
I think if you made the smaller and made it look more like a profiel eye itd help alot.
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Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2006 11:29 am
Thanks for all of the suggestions. I can see where you all see the that the eyes, mouth and nose need fixing.
& about the eyes not being in the middle, I dont even know why, I just think my face sucks ahha. (:
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Posted: Sun Dec 10, 2006 1:46 pm
The eyes are too high up, which makes the rest of the face seem too long. Otherwise, it looks great! Really good. Keep it up. <3
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