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Spinelle

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Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 11:25 am

The title has absolutely NOTHING to do with the drawing. I just assumed you'd click it if you saw the title. Which you must've 'cause you reading this.
I haven't drawn anything for the guild in a million years 'cause I havent been online. However I drew this quickie (not a quickie... if you know what I didnt mean) so I could say Im alive.
DON'T note that I switched pens half way through drawing this 'cause my favorite ran out.
DO critique this I lately have been slacking on faces.
PLUS. I have a lot of new photos & Drawings on my deviantaart check that out (link in my signature) If you dont have an account to comment there, you can say here what drawing your commenting/critiquing!

& Thanks for your time. Here is the drawing!

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Posted: Sun Dec 10, 2006 1:52 pm

Wow, that is crazy awesome. The chin is too short, you could say, as in the face ends too soon. Also the bow doesn't look as detailed as the rest of the image, and the shirt has no wrinkles. Even though I'm sure I shouldn't be focusing on the shirt, it would be nice to have a bit of detail in there, no? :3

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Posted: Sun Dec 17, 2006 9:01 am

Spinelle! :]
I'm guilty of not logging on enough, as well.

Two things that stick out for me is the right nostril should be a bit higher, and farther away from the tip of the nose than the left nostril, and the neck seems a bit awkward (speaking of have you ever noticed how awkwardly spelled the word 'awkward' is?), kind of cutting off before joining with the head and being a little too skinny at the bottom.

Really cool picture, though. Lovely frizzy hair and expressive eyes, and you managed to make the nose have a bit of depth even without lines there to blatantly point it out. : D
I definitely need to get off my bum and go check out dA accounts.

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